Hey everyone, here is my entry for the contest!
SEPTEMBER CONTEST: Everyone was shocked to see her show up to school with...
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@Coley I love this! Very well done!
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@danielerossi Thank you! I was really trying to sell the weight of the tree. I'm glad it came through.
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@Coley That reflection looks really awesome! Great Work!
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@chrisaakins thank you
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@zacharygephardt thanks
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@zacharygephardt Your drawing recalled a flashback from elementary school. We were instructed to bring leaves to class and I actually brought branches!
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@SFischer I'm not sure about what it takes to make it portfolio ready but I do which there were areas of more clarity -without the light difference the touch of your brush is all the same. so more definition in areas would help in my opinion.
I like it.
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@SFischer Love the concept, perspective, and color palette! I do agree with Heather though, I think choosing to tighten up some edges of characters either in the foreground or background would help.
Personally, I think tightening the background figures/ground/sky to be more crisp and leaving the foreground figures out of focus and blurry like they are now would really pull it all together and direct the eye to the kid on the dino. Right now I'm drawn to those kids silhouetted in the front row first, and the dinosaur read as a tree initially until I looked closer.
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So... how do we attend the critique and winner reveal live?