@theprairiefox Good idea! I think that is exactly what needs to happen. Good call!

Hi @sarahlawrence I like the idea you have. I like the first one because it looks like the kid is running away and has no idea the other kid is about to launch onto his back. It has a lot of movement and the faces pull you into the composition. I think if you framed the kid running through a door into a darkened room that could look really cool.

I thought of what creature would be terrifying if it was 200 stories tall and came up with a praying mantis. I kind of want to do this in a retro style like 1950's horror films. I want the letters of his name to be the sky behind him but I am not sure yet how to do that. Here is a thumbnail of my idea so far.

Do you have any ideas how I could do the lettering? Should Godzilla be featured? I read that he was a copyrighted character and his owners have sued many people in the past for using his likeness, so I am kind of gun shy about using him.

@Braden-Hallett this is a really great composition. You have really grown in your work. I thought it was great when we first met, but you are killing it. Your storytelling is phenomenal. Your style is instantly recognizable. Way to go!

@MattBaker Awww thanks!

@LisaF no email here, either and I am a subscriber

@Susan-Marks it was a wedding gift. The pages were random but I used the titles to accent the beauty of marriage.

I am giving this t a client today.

@Ethan it reads really well and you created a good sense of suspense. A good start, I would say.

Looks great!