@Nyrryl-Cadiz Thanks for your input! I think you might be right, I will try it out.
@marek-halko Thank you for taking the time to do a paintover! I love the subtlety you introduced with all the lighting touches. I do love how the darkened book shelf makes the ghost stand out. I'm trying to convey the idea that the house shows up as it once was, when the moonlight hits it, which it why I made the book shelf so light, but it has been causing trouble with readability. Again thanks for your paintover, I'll definitely incorporate what I can.
@Melanie-Ortins Thank you! I'll keep my eye on that as I try to finish it up.