Hello everyone, finally managed to finish it!
Thank you for all the suggestions and help: @Annaaronson @franksandovalart @baileymvidler
Have an Exiting Week!

Hello everyone, almost missed the deadline, again
I`ts my first time participating, hope you like it, and any feedback is welcome!

Hello everyone!
I was rely exited about the first art challenge of 2020, and I immediately started to sketch & paint, ironically since it was winter, in the last two weeks of January I got sick and I wasn't able to finish it, but here it is.
Please let me know what you think!

Hello Everyone,
I have been working on the exiting project for the past week in my spare time, very exited about how it came out, but I`m still not sure if I could consider it finished.
Maybe something is still missing or something can still be tweaked to make it better.
Please share your thoughts, what do you think?

Thank you, and much Love to you all!

Hello Everyone,
I have been working on this continuation of my Nightfall Illustration project from February, very exited about how it came out, but there are still things to be polished or changed. A few Fresh Eyes would be greatly appreciated!
Please share your thoughts, what do you think?

The text is just a placeholder, one of my friends will be writing a little story for this illustration.
Thank you, and much Love to you all!

The Cover, from the February Contest:

@Jane-Smith-0 said in WIP - Bongo the monkey. Your Feedback is greatly appreciated.:

Clyde

Aloha Everyone, thank you for all of your amazing suggestion, here is the final result!

Hi Georgios, I think A. is more a dramatic composition.
When you are drawing the final image, I would recommend that you use the movement of her hair and clothes to illustrate the fact that she is floating away, on some of your thumbnails it gives me the impression that she is arriving to meet him, rather then leaving.
Great start, cant wait to see how you progress

Hi Holley, I think nr. 3 is the most exiting in concept and also the Title would be framed very beautifully and it would stand out much more from the rest of the image.

@Qi Your use of color and textures are amazing Qi. You managed to captures the mood and color pallet of the sunset beautifully!

@Jane-Smith-0 Yes, he was just used by a Monkey!
Have a great weekend Jane!

Hi Griff, in my humble opinion Nr.4 would be the most effective, it feels the most balances, and it leads the eye nicely to the title, and after that gently to the little house. It would be interesting to try a version with the wicked witch too.
Cant wait to see your detailed sketches!

@Laurel-Aylesworth @Nyrryl-Cadiz @baileymvidler Thank you everyone fro the feedback! I think it needs a bit more fine tuning with the characters, and after that I will call it finished!

Hi Holley, I think nr. 3 is the most exiting in concept and also the Title would be framed very beautifully and it would stand out much more from the rest of the image.

Hello Everyone,
I have been working on this continuation of my Nightfall Illustration project from February, very exited about how it came out, but there are still things to be polished or changed. A few Fresh Eyes would be greatly appreciated!
Please share your thoughts, what do you think?

The text is just a placeholder, one of my friends will be writing a little story for this illustration.
Thank you, and much Love to you all!

The Cover, from the February Contest:

@miranda-hoover Hi Miranda, the composition and colors are on point
I love how Clyde is super huge compared to Bongo, just like at the opening of the New Hope, how princess Leia`s ship is super small compared to the star destroyer.

@miranda-hoover Hi Miranda, thank you, I hope I didn't went Overboard with the colors, I tend to go very saturated when it comes to painting.

@Mr-Kite Hi Mr. Kite, love the expression of Clyde, he is so frustrated!

@Jane-Smith-0 said in WIP - Bongo the monkey. Your Feedback is greatly appreciated.:

Clyde

Aloha Everyone, thank you for all of your amazing suggestion, here is the final result!

Hello everyone, finally managed to finish it!
Thank you for all the suggestions and help: @Annaaronson @franksandovalart @baileymvidler
Have an Exiting Week!

@baileymvidler I will reposition him, I think it will make much more sense that way and it will also balance the composition.
Right now it works under the Game of thrones logic, you have seemingly shallow river, but abruptly it goes several metres down
Thank you, have a great weekend!