In addition to what everyone else said, I like the strong sense of volume.

@Nyrryl-Cadiz Just wanted to add my congratulations on your perseverance and a job well done!

@BichonBistro I know what you mean. Sometimes I do a thumbnail that I think is great, but when I get to roughs, it makes no sense anatomically or in terms of perspective. It's just too abstract! And then when I fix it, it loses its charm.

But in general, I really like pushing it on the thumbnails, like we did in Turbocharging Your Creativity. I've subscribed, and will listen ASAP because this is a great topic! Welcome to the world of YouTube creators, @Lee-White!

What a great visual allegory of the wonder of childhood and how adults hold children back from their imagination and intuition! The way the adult's thumb presses into the girl's skin and the hand grips her upper arm is telling. Also, I almost said something about how small the girl's irises and pupils are in her eye, but overall it helps to give her a slightly wasted-away look that adds to the story. I love your painting, and even the blurry flowers, but I see why it is better to have them in focus. I also like the color in the tips of the fingers. Good work!

One question: What is the difference between the large image and the one on the lower left? Am I just not seeing something obvious?!

@Su Thank you!!

@Johan-Schneider Welcome! And congratulations!

@LauraA That weird z thing on the older boy's leg is one of those stray Photoshop marks. Didn't notice it until now. I'll get rid of it, but just ignore it for now.

@Su How's this? I firmed them up but then took down the value, because I really don't want them to take center stage.

Which is better? I think the light one but I've lost all objectivity. Also asking for serious critique from anyone who feels so inclined. I want to finish this thing! Thanks!

@TessaW Thank you!!!