Hey! This is a first approach for an Effective Vehicle Design #caricature What color should I use? Maybe red, blue, green?...drop me a line and let me know! Thanks for feedback and comments!...#photoshop #vehicle #illustration EFFECTIVE VEHICLE DESIGN - CARICATURE - SKETCH.jpg

@gavpartridge Hi Gav, thanks for the feedback, mate!, Yeah, That tire in the back looks almost the same that the front one, you are absolutely right, mate. This is the first cut, and I´m going to improve it with all the fabulous inputs my artwork gets. And yes, That´s the idea I had when I designed this concept, thinking about a pandemic outbreak. We´ll need these kind of vehicles in the future, mobile hospitals. Thanks again mate!

Week 5: Balloon

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@TessaW I think I got a little hasty with the coloring there at the end. I think the girl's color looked a little better before the export from my iPad, but I definitely see an issue there. Thanks for the feedback!

@TessaW thank you, I didn’t realize that I had lost the cowlick, and shadows are so tricky for me.

Thanks, great idea.

@Chris-Philpot nice... much more impact!

@franksandovalart thank you 🙂

@aska Thanx! =)x

Hi Aska, Good morning!, yes, maybe look odd because that is the hospital building which is over the vehicle, but is not rendered yet, hehehehe!...that´s funny. Thanks for your imput. Checking your work at your sn profiles, hope continue coming and dropping your comments. Thanks!

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@smoke Cool I'm glad it helped out!

@EliaMurrayArt that might be doable. Thank goodness for the transform tool LoL. As long as I can maintain a believable perspective. I'll play with it later tonight. 🙂

Hi everyone!
#HospitalRover This is a #workinprogress, I was imagine giant trucks as hospitals, now facing a pandemia about the #covid19 just like the big hospital ships but in the soil. This is my first illustration full developed in #Photoshop What do you think guys? It could be possible huge truck hospitals like this in the future? would be great to read your comments. Thanks

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Yes! I think every one of these changes makes the piece better!

@Beau I don't think you have to study much, tbh. I think the eyes do probably need to be farther apart, but you clearly know your proportions really well already. I think it's a matter of what is emphasized, and in that case it's a matter of deciding IF you want to change things. Your illustration does communicate that feeling, but I think the way I took it was a little more universal in its concept - like no matter who you are, if you're close to a baby there is pleasure in just holding that baby. I got that from the expression on her face, and it's what led me to comment 🙂
So then when I looked at it more closely, i noticed all the details about holding a baby that were so familiar, i just love those little things. I love the way newborns have things about them that aren't that perfect rounded chub of a four month old! But the accuracy of the baby emphasizes the baby in a way that you might not have intended. And it's not quite consistent with some of the choices you have made with the mother. Although she has strong looking arms, her head is a bit bigger than normal proportions, so it felt like the main concept was her feeling of holding the baby.
So I guess what I'm trying to say is that I think you know your proportions pretty well (to check what you would like to do, maybe scale down the mother's features to the size of the baby's head and see if they are similar with eye placement) and you know how to render things accurately, but it's a matter of deciding your emphasis (I personally think it should be on the feeling of the mother holding the baby, not on the baby, because most of us don't remember that as babies) and then adding detail or taking away detail to communicate your concept.

Will Terry has mentioned having had this very same problem at first! I don't know exactly when he mentioned it in the 3 point perspective podcast, but it amazed me because I know he has always known how to draw! So basically, there is an element of illustrating that is purposely taking away detail and leaving things un-rendered, and that does seem to apply to babies. Especially with artists that know how to precisely render things.
I keep getting pulled away, so if my distinction between studying proportions and deciding on emphasis doesn't make any sense, please let me know!

I really like the use of texture- I think the sky/moon & lighting on the boat and sail work well. I would only suggest brightening (adding/changing something) to emphasize the faces of the animals to drive home the focal point. Really beautiful piece!

I like the black lettering and blue vest. This has the best contrast in my opinion. I like the composition and the colors of the trees indicating the three grounds. Well done.

@Neha-Rawat he's supposed to be doing that so I guess I have to convey that better Ha ha 😅. It's so good to know how others see things and get feedback. Thanks again
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@Casual-T Don't worry about it. I've returned to traditional and it hit me today as I was using coloured gouache and adding white to the colours that yellows really are a very light value. Maybe in your next work or go back in this one if its digital and up the contrast and add just one element extra for storytelling. Don't work on everything but work on one thing more for the next time. I'm trying. 🙂

I also use to do some close up photography -so I like your bud flower coming out of the ground.