@Georgios-Christopoulos I agree that I like the composition of the second one better. As for readability, I think the line breaks do affect how people read it but it this case it just seems like the "pauses" make it more dramatic. So I don't feel like it takes away from the meaning. It just forces the reader to kind of feel that "slow-mo" feeling in the middle of the action scene which I think is the point

Days 15 through 31 will be uploaded here!!! https://forum.svslearn.com/topic/10272/inktober-day-15-31-critiques-are-welcome

@VeronicaMui thank you for the comments! I can definitely see how the right knee appears to face inwards; I think I originally thought it was a cool idea when I was drawing it, but now I have to agree, it looks more painful than cool! One of my family members took a look at this work when I first finished it and pointed out the same issue with the forearm. I wanted it to be foreshortened, but It doesn't really give off that vibe with the way the body is positioned and all. It most certainly seems shrunk when I look at it now! (Maybe some extra line weight/bolding around the forearm would have helped to give off that effect?) I intended the red laser blast to come from a person off screen at a higher level than the in-frame character (hence why this clone trooper character is pointing his blaster upwards); I wanted the laser to look like it was making an impact with the ground, but I can see how it actually looks as if the ground is shooting the laser! I do agree that the red laser should be raised at least some amount upwards from its current position. Thanks again for your feedback and insight on my work! I appreciate it!

Hi guys! I m currently working on a step to step timelapse video for my followers on IG , regarding the stages I go through when making a digital illustration. I upload a step every day ,and I answer questions regarding that step. Figured I d share this here if anyone is interested to see another approach to art , and also to get feedback and critiques. Here is the first four steps I made , rough concept-sketch-inks-colour blocked. If you have any questions, feel free to share! Cheers! G-Chris

@Jeremy-Ross just checked it out! It s wonderful! Thanks for the feedback my friend!!

Hello everyone! G.Chris here.I hope everyone is in good health. Coronavirus is awful, but let s tell the truth. Artists know what it means to stay quarantined... Anyways , I found myself thinking a lot of new concepts for artworks now that I am confined. Here is one, feel free to critique and say what you like or don't like about this piece! Be safe and stay healthy! Giorgos Christopoulos / G.Chris.Artwork

@NessIllustration @MichaelaH @chrisaakins Hey Gang, thank you all for taking the time to give feedback on this piece, I really appreciate it! I'll play around with some of these ideas and see where it takes the illustration

@Jorge-Valentin Hello and welcome to the forum! This is such an expressive painting. I look forward to seeing more.

Update on this: Renders using Blender. I think I'm done with this now. Like I said before, if anyone else is interested in this technique for lighting flat 2d art with 3d shaders or normal maps in Photoshop I wrote about it on my blog. I'll get on with other art to do with my personal project now.

I have two guinea pigs myself, glad to see them get a little attention! They are so cute when they're eating, which is pretty much all the time. Great expression.

I've just finished this Logan painting, it turned out better than I expected so I'm really happy with the result. I hope to post more stuff really soon, it's my first time actually sharing it. This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International License. P.S.: I don't know how to add that CC license code to this post, so if anyone has a tip on it, I'll be all ears.

@jon-anderson thanks for the advice about adding another point of interest. @Eli thank you so much for letting me know of the posting guidelines. It’s a big help.