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    • Georgios Christopoulos

      Opinion about this speech bubble?
      Questions & Comments • critique help digital art inktober 2020 opinion • • Georgios Christopoulos  

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      Melanie Ortins

      @Georgios-Christopoulos I agree that I like the composition of the second one better. As for readability, I think the line breaks do affect how people read it but it this case it just seems like the "pauses" make it more dramatic. So I don't feel like it takes away from the meaning. It just forces the reader to kind of feel that "slow-mo" feeling in the middle of the action scene which I think is the point
    • Chris Perry

      Match Girl Color Script and treatment studies
      General Discussion • opinion color scripts • • Chris Perry  

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      Brad

      I like C the most for it's readability and the fact that it's a cold snowy environment draws a greater emotional reaction towards the girl