@kayleenartlover hi kayleen! this is just me but maybe you simplify this piece more and remove a few of the kids?

I believe they discuss this in a 3pp episode, but I couldn’t for the life of me tell you which one, I’m sorry for that useless piece of information lol.

Good day everyone! I hope you all have been well and working joyfully in creating.

I am working on a landscape of Alberta (Canada) with a bit of an imaginary foreground. Can you help me by double checking my perspective? I'm not sure how to double check a 3rd point perspective, it wasn't in my original plans (you can see below in the first drawing).

And if you see anything that needs tweaking, please let me know. I want the one rock coming out of the frame and the others snug to the edge. I want this rock flat and not feeling like it's on an angle.

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Thanks guys,

Heather Boyd. 🙂 ❤

@Lee-White Awesome, Lee! Thank you so much for the response, I'll check that out.

@aurelia @AngelinaKizz @carlianne @Kim-Rosenlof @Asyas_illos @amandalo @TessaW @Sarah-VanDam Thank you so much everyone! your support and encouragement definitely helped me in creating the new pieces for the contest.

After my bad experience during last year's showcase where a bug on the SCBWI website showed that I already uploaded my entry images but in reality, they weren't, and which I only learned about after the deadline preventing me from joining the contest all together, I kinda lost faith in SCBWI and the showcase.

I wasn't expecting to win then (or even now) but I was hoping that by joining, I can get my work in front of potential clients. I was crushed when I learned that I was excluded from the showcase. Not to mention this all happened during my birthday. I ate my birthday cake in tears (this really happened). I posted about it here in the forum so if you're interested in that train wreck, just dig around the old posts. lolz

If it weren't for @Asyas_illos posting about the SCBWI conference and the other rabbits here in the forum, I probably wouldn't have joined (As I did the last 2 conferences). Or if I did, I would've used my old pieces and not bother making new ones which most likely would lead to different a outcome for me.

That is why I am very grateful to everyone here. I wouldn't have won if it weren't for you guys. From the bottom of my heart, thank u so much!!!! 😭😭😭😭🙏🙏🙏🙏 ❤❤❤❤

Great choice! This makes me want to make some princess bride fan art

@maarcos-l welcome!!! Looking forward to seeing more!!

@carlianne Ok, this is adorable and made me smile, I need more!

@Michael-Angelo-Go Hello! Great to see you around! I like the cartoonist style.
Adding from what Nyrryl told you before, the overall way of the torso is telling me that it's in a 3/4 view, but the boobs tell me that it's a front view.
I would also change her right arm, at least I would smooth the elbow, so the arm falls naturally.

@Johanna-Kim and @kirsten-mcg Thank you for your feedback! I have been out of town for a while and so just saw it today.

@Valerie-Light @Asyas_illos Yeah. We’ve got this! Rooting for both of you!!

Another wip for the rabbit race. I have change it so much that it’s funny to look at it now lol.
I had spend a lot of time on it already so I would really appreciate if somebody could give me some feedback ☺️
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@Griffin this is marvelous! I absolutely love it because I feel that I've never seen this before (which can be rare in kidlit art) - great job with the color picking and the lighting!

The only thing that I found when looking at it a little harder are the hands of the girl in the orange-ish sweater. There is this impression I get that they aren't really grabbing onto the bee as maybe they should be, but I also feel like I'm being picky.

I really struggled to find something to suggest to change. This is an awesome piece!

Such a big difference! What a cute and charming house!

@Griffin Thank you so much for the advice, and you were absolutely right. I completely reworked it and came up with a completely different composition in the end. I did a "modern take" on why the rabbit lost the race! I posted it on the main Rabbit Road Race thread. Wow, ok I did 10, but I can definitely see how 30 would have been even better. I appreciate you taking the time to give me feedback and it's so great to be learning more and more from the forums everyday!

Thanks for sharing this with us, @akwisler!! You've got some nice line work
and depth happening on the second piece!! 🙂 And there's a charm in the first. Nice clean lines. You could truly develop that style as well.

@ajillustrates I really love this. Excellent job!

@Asyas_illos thanks Asyas!

@PenAndrew Thank you Andrew 🙂

@Kristen-Lango Thank you 😁