Rock Fortress help

[Malachi Hudelson]

any advice.do i need to change anything

[Fey Realme]

@Malachi-Hudelson I'd love to hear what your trying to do, that would help us all know if you need to change anything to accomplish what you are trying to do

[tom.barrett]

It needs to be a bit more finished before anyone can really comment on it. Looks like a good start, but it very unclear what the story is.

[alexw]

@Malachi-Hudelson What is your plan for this composition?

Is this your first composition?

Have you tried doing a series of thumbnails and a variety of different ideas?

What story are you trying to tell with this fortress? What is the subject matter?

Is this piece going to be at night or day time? Dusk?

Have you researched how real life fortresses look? Have you done any exercise sketches of those fortresses?

If you're able to answer some of these questions, this will help us give you some advice for the work your doing.