2 Jan 2024, 18:35

@tom-barrett said in Work in Progress πŸ˜ƒ - Feedback Welcome:

@von_Nimmermehr Love the idea! Composition looks pretty good. I agree, the current pose is not working well.

I suggest having her lifting the lid to a present. Keep her pose facing the reader like in the last thumbnail, but maybe a bit more off center, and have her eyes cutting back to the parent frog in a shocked expression.

thanks again for your suggestions.
you where right about her eyes and also the hand, it made the drawing much better πŸ™‚

here is the finished drawing. i guess there are still changes i could do, but for now im done.

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