Thanks everyone! B seems to be the clear winner. I suppose the white outline worked well with my inktobers because it was just the character and not a full illustration. @TessaW and @Adrian-K here is a version with just the splatters.
Hi everyone I just thought I’d post a work in progress. I would really appreciate any criticism and feedback from you all.
The drawing is just part of a short series of sequences I’m doing so I can study keeping a character and telling very short story visually.
So the two characters are loosely sketched out and I’m thinking of using light from windows in the house to add emphasis on their faces.
This scene the boy discovers a dinosaur at breakfast time.
So I finished and posted on "LOVE" Contest. Later this week I will post smaller process -it was far more scattered than I'd like but I learned an impressive amount. And I will update you on what I learned at that point. I spelt February wrong and realised that my snow was too yellow. So I made small changes.
I am very happy with it and look forward to working it into a personal style, with some more experimenting and line practise (lols).
Done Done Done. But still feedback or advice for the future and how to layout a pattern collection would be awesome. Really, any feedback on the entire thing together is great too. Any element missing? More darks, more blinders, more contrast. Any words are appreciated.
Very cute characters. I actually enjoyed the little stylized hearts hearts between them from your original. I agree they do not look like they are standing on the same plane. The male's feet do not line up with the females. Maybe you could move him down?
Hi everyone. I listened to the “how to get 10k followers” video and decided to work on my first giveaway. Gonna order a bunch of postcards (once this is done) and send them out to people for free. Inspiration for this came from Terry Pratchettes “The Amazing Maurice and his Educated Rodents”. There is also a Terry Pratchett calendar that publishes art from various artists yearly, gonna look into that some more.
This is gonna be inked on paper then colored.
@rotub i would exaggerate the cake a bit more, if they gonna feast on a cake, give them a cake! Embeleish it! I’d also add some things around the restaurant maybe some valentines day things like hearts and stuff, perhaps a couple in the back being escorted to their table by a waiter and they’re staring at the cake to fill that empty space? The only thing that told me the other diners are on a date were the romantic candles. Theres a lot of negative space up above the scene too.