Looking for feedback

[ksfabian]

Hey everyone, I entered a last minute local art contest. I have two pieces I’m creating to enter. I’d love feedback on them thus far.

[Larue]

Hi there, I like your frog image. Here's my two cents. Don't know the story of course but right off the bat I'd say you need to push your proportions more. Everything is about the same size at the moment. I think if you increase the size of mushroom and the frog to be more in the foreground that'd be a good start. I can't tell if the mushrooms on the lower right are in the foreground or middle ground. My eye is also going to the empty "grass?" area right in the center so unless that's where text is going that could be a problem, maybe move your woodland creature there?. All your elements are there you just need to move and resize them. Looking forward to seeing it in color!

[ksfabian]

@Larue thanks so much!! Great feedback

[ksfabian]

Okay I’ve tweeked the background but I didn’t like the lack of story. So I have a couple options I’m wavering between. Frog in a wolf suit or wolf in a frog suit. ![alt text]

[ksfabian]

@Larue