@Durrell-Odom I was looking that the mothership picture now that it is colored and I was wondering what she has in her hand? I am not quite reading it... I like it with color, is really working well. The color combinations of the shirts is providing good definition of each kid.
Love your caricatures BTW, very cool. I struggle with being hesitant to exaggerate features and you do it beautifully.
Thanks everyone! B seems to be the clear winner. I suppose the white outline worked well with my inktobers because it was just the character and not a full illustration. @TessaW and @Adrian-K here is a version with just the splatters.
When you are working on for 3-d constructions make sure they start as basic shapes so you can pose your character without difficulty Jake's video lessons on this subject are very good.
Yeah, I think you can! Just make sure that tortoise head it standing out from the hare. If it's not working just go through the list to see if you can tweak anything:
Color
Value
Saturation
Hard or soft edges
Highlights or linework
Thank you all for the feedback! Really love when people notice issues that sometimes I can't notice.
Will make changes as much as possible and post the final piece!
@will-terry thanks for your time!! I like the direction you took this, and is very similar to the other critiques I recieved from Lee White. I will rework it with your recommendation.
Hi there! posting my first illustration on the forum, this crazy early bird. Painting done in procreate. Inspired by color theory tutorial by Will.
Hi there, hereby my first post, this illustration of this crazy early bird. Painting done in procreate.
Inspired by color theory tutorial by Will. Tried to be more aware of the use of saturated/unsaturated colors to put emphasis on main part (head). Any feedback? thanks
@lmrush thanks for the feedback! I was originally going to have her facing the moon, so you can't see her face, but after taking a break, I think a profile shot would be better
@lee-white That's absolutely understandable! It's a bit of a passion project so I'll absolutely keep working on designing it but what you said about taking in account all the costs of production, I'll definitely put that on hold until I am able to figure it all out. This was incredibly insightful advice! Thank you!!
I agree with @IanS. the only thing that confused me was the road! However i love the style and the direction of the piece! What could also tie the composition together could be some distant rolling hills in the background on the right side of the piece!
This is really FUN! I absolutely like your concept. You could increase the contrast for the duck which is at the fore front and probably make the background brighter as it goes further.
@gary-wilkinson I really like it !!
maybe a little more saturated like this Will´s work:
http://willterry.blogspot.com.es/2013/12/
and the other snails need driver ants.
