Hello Fellow SVS'ers,
This is my first time posting any of my own artwork and it is just a preliminary sketch, but welcome some feedback.
It is for my Picture Book The Merry-Go-Round Tree.

Mr. Mole keeper of tunnels and secrets. Critiques welcome.

Congratulations!

Constructive criticism welcome.

Full disclaimer we are on the road and I have limited supplies so I borrowed my kids crayons color pencils. !

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@Heather-Boyd Yes in my second sketch I drew today I tied the rope around the branch and putting more motion in the tire swing makes perfect sense. Thank you!

Thank you Tessa. I was afraid the monkey’s action was ambiguous.

Constructive criticism welcome.

Full disclaimer we are on the road and I have limited supplies so I borrowed my kids crayons color pencils. !

CFD62BCB-B1C6-4996-8E92-525041FD7087.jpeg

Congratulations!

@gavpartridge and @PieterVanDerBeek Thank you for the tips. I will definitely work on the values more. But as for the arms, moles don’t really have much of an arm. It’s like their hands pop out of their sides, but I can definitely spend more time rendering his hands. Thanks again.

@TessaW Thank you Tessa. Great tips and ideas. I will definitely take them into consideration in my next rendering. Thank you.

@chrisaakins Hi Chris. Yes, it is just a sketch. I’m just looking for feedback on ways to improve. Things that might need work that I don’t see.

Mr. Mole keeper of tunnels and secrets. Critiques welcome.

@Heather-Boyd Yes in my second sketch I drew today I tied the rope around the branch and putting more motion in the tire swing makes perfect sense. Thank you!

@carolinebautista Great advice thank you.

Hello Fellow SVS'ers,
This is my first time posting any of my own artwork and it is just a preliminary sketch, but welcome some feedback.
It is for my Picture Book The Merry-Go-Round Tree.