My Yeti is a gentle soul who enjoys gardening, baking, bird watching and relaxing by the fire with his pet lynx and a good cup of tea.

At this point I’m just hoping the guys critique why this isn’t working.

My Yeti is a quiet hermit, who is somewhat hobbit like. He enjoys a good stew and a hot cup of tea.

*After the last critique arena I’m not sure this will be enough wild “Yeti” for what the guys were hoping for, but I figure I better stick with the civilized hermit direction my yeti character started with.

It was tough getting this and Inktober done, but here is my submission for this months contest. I had a lot of fun drawing this one.

Everyone was having a great time at the Halloween feast until...

Day 1 and 2 of Inktober.

I’ve never knowingly drawn a spot illustration. I hope I’m following the rules. Seeking feedback on what I have so far. Thanks in advance.

Ye-tea, party of one.

My family surprised me with an early birthday present and gave me my first iPad Pro and Apple Pencil. I am over the moon to figure out digital painting, as I’ve been purely traditional up until now. I watched Will Terry’s class on ‘Painting with iPad Pro with Procreate’ and did a quick sketch of his robot drawing. There’s so much more I can do with this drawing, but I’m eager to start working on my dummy book so this is as far as I’ve taken it for now. Just wanted to share my FIRST ever digital drawing. Can’t wait to learn more.

That being said does anyone have some recommendations for where to learn more about Procreate?

Looking for feedback on my WIP. Struggling to think of personal articles that will elude to my Yeti’s personality.

@Coley I’ll be attending the conference this weekend. My Instagram is erin_rew_author_illustrator.

My Yeti is a quiet hermit, who is somewhat hobbit like. He enjoys a good stew and a hot cup of tea.

*After the last critique arena I’m not sure this will be enough wild “Yeti” for what the guys were hoping for, but I figure I better stick with the civilized hermit direction my yeti character started with.

Great question. I could use a course like this too.

I like 3, 4, 7.

I would encourage you to include more of the belly dancer, including her head. That way you can incorporate more of her costume and make it more clear who she is. It will also humanize her more and maybe soften the message that the little boy is “ogling” or objectifying her. I also think the musicians sitting on the floor is a better composition.

@Nyrryl-Cadiz Thank you! I was trying to do something that would stand out.

@KayPotter Thank you Kay.

Any better?

@KayPotter Thank you for the feedback Kay. I will work on what you pointed out.

I like the one in the upper right corner... and your cute yeti is adorable.