Frog Circus WIP Thread

[Marta Kitka]

Hi! I really love your style! You said that you are trying to avoid overrendering which is very good idea beceause all the details on the trees are grabbing the attention. What I would suggest is darkening leaves and trees to put more emphasis on the most important part of the composition.

[StudioLooong]

@lmrush ahh okay so now all the characters are pretty parallel to the picture plain and that's what I should vary?

@MartaD thanks, definitely will do! This is just the "line work." (I know it's a little more than line work but at this stage it's more about the texture of the pencil for me than the actual tone.) I'm planning on doing just what you've done as I add tone and color under the pencil work. There's more texture on the trees and bushes because I know I'll lose some of that detail as I add darker tone behind it.

[lmrush]

Here are two quick examples of what I was thinking...If I am way off just ignore me

[A Former User]

This works really well as spread with text, it's balanced really nicely on each side, and looks much better now that you've moved the frog away from the smoke
Another small suggestion, maybe move the frog that has dived into the water in front of the boat so all the characters are spread out a little bit more and it would fill a bit more of that water space.
I agree that the bottom left corner needs some kind of larger foliage there (not too much that its distracting), just so we can get a sense of depth, and maybe the horizon line of the water should be straight? It's catching my eye that it's higher on the right! But apart from that I think you have a really strong piece here and i can't wait to see it in colour

[StudioLooong]

thanks for all the help everyone! I think i'm going to move into adding tone and color now.

[StudioLooong]

It's still only about half way done but here's my progress on the frog circus:

[chrisaakins]

@StudioLooong I think you can intensify the color a little bit on the background foliage. It has the same value as the sky and it wouldn't unless very very far away. It looks great otherwise. A two page spread is perfect and reads really well.

[StudioLooong]

I'm thinking this is almost done, I am going to take a break and come back to it tomorrow with fresh eyes for a final pass. I've mocked in some text but the trees behind it are rendered so I can turn it off If I want to present it without.

[StudioLooong]

Finally calling this one finished!

[lmrush]

@StudioLooong looks great!

[lmrush]

@StudioLooong YOu did an amazing job WOW, you are insane at rendering!!!!! Soooo good!!!!!

[StudioLooong]

@lmrush thanks that pencil sketch I do takes care of about 75% of the work for me, once it's in photoshop it's basically like doing a very complicated coloring book page.

[lmrush]

@StudioLooong Well it is awesome, do you mind me asking what brushes you use in photoshop?

[StudioLooong]

@lmrush I use a hard brush to block in the colors (kind of like flatting a comic book page) and then I use the dry media brushes from the Kyle's Ultimate Brushset - my go-to's are "shady graphite" "pastel palooza" and "chunky charcoal"

[lmrush]

@StudioLooong thanks so much!

[Gary Wilkinson]

@StudioLooong lovely painting! Didn't get time to comment on its process but it turned out great!