Halloween illustration-WIP (feedback requested)
lenwen last edited by
For this year halloween, I came out with idea about the halloween from the ghost's point of view. Here 3 ideas of composition I had:
which composition do you guys think turn out best? or another suggestion will also very welcome.
Thank you so much
NessIllustration last edited by
What a cool concept, and I really like #2!
Chip Valecek last edited by
@lenwen I also like number 2, also getting a little oogie boogie kids feel from it. Love Nightmare before christmas. One of my favorite movies!
Debra Garcia last edited by
I'll keep it unanimous, and confirm that #2 is pretty awesome. I can't wait to see where you take this piece.
artwithashley last edited by artwithashley
This is fantastic and creepy, and full of all good Grimm fairytale goodness!! #2 is great.
- EDIT - So after reading that it is the story from the ghosts point of view, I change my previous statement. Just looking at the thumbnails I thought the story was about a witch who snatches children on Halloween!!
It looks to me that #1 would tell more of the little ghost boy wanting to join in on the Halloween festivities. Your compositions look really great with all the cool shapes & lines. I'll be looking forward to seeing how you are going to render this & what your lighting will look like
Johanna Kim last edited by
@lenwen I'm going to go with #1 even though it seems the favorite is #2. The ghost seems the most interesting figure and this one shows it most prominently. My second favorite is #3. Looking forward to seeing your progress.
nyrrylcadiz last edited by
Great concept! I’m leaning on #1 but with a more closed up view of the ghost, cowering in fear.
burvantill last edited by
One is my favorite as well. It’s the ghosts story and they stand out more there.
Eli last edited by
Another vote for 1 with 3 as runner up. I think they match your story better if you're going from the ghosts' point of view. They are all great!
Laurie last edited by
1 is my vote with 2 being second....I think that these two put more emphasis on the ghosts as the focus, although they are all working well compositionally!
lenwen last edited by
thanks a lot @Chip-Valecek @Debra-Garcia @Johanna-Kim @nyrrylcadiz @burvantill @Eli @Laurie ! I really appreciate the feedbacks. So far #1 is the favourite, and I think it's true that it represents the point of view from the ghost better. I will edit the ghosts closer as @nyrrylcadiz suggestion.
@artwithashley thanks for your feedbacks! what you mentioned is really true. I should change the boy's gesture and expression.
LauraA last edited by
Just now seeing this and I like number 1. It's really striking!
riftweaver last edited by
I like #2 the best; but in terms of story, I prefer #1. It makes it evident that we are looking at the ghosts as central characters, and it's arguably more clear what's going on with the little ghost boy crying.
lauramarie last edited by
Definitely number 1! It focuses most on the ghosts POV and really puts the viewer in the shoes of that character.