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    • phoenix yip

      What’s missing?
      Projects • critique composition drawing procreate digital drawing • • phoenix yip  

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      phoenix yip

      @skillydan that’s a great idea, thanks!
    • phoenix yip

      WIP Thumbnails for Comic
      Projects • illustration thumbnails composition comic books • • phoenix yip  

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      phoenix yip

      Hey SVS people! what do you think about these thumbnails? Are they clear? Do they look ok? Any critiques and comments are welcome. Thanks! Also it goes from bottom to top. )
    • mamadraw

      Troll mountain critique
      Artwork • critique composition painting • • mamadraw  

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    • PieterVanDerBeek

      June Contest - WIP - Critiques welcome
      Artwork • wip contest thumbnails composition • • PieterVanDerBeek  

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      PieterVanDerBeek

      @Chip-Valecek @theprairiefox – Thanks! Having both Bongo and Clyde visible would indeed seem more appropriate...
    • phoenix yip

      Comic book cover WIP, Critiques encouraged!
      Projects • illustration wip composition comic bookcover • • phoenix yip  

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      carlianne

      You made amazing improvements!! I really like this new cover compared to the old one. My only comment is I think you should still say "by pheonix yip" and maybe less kearning on that so it's easier to read. Also, maybe adjust the cloud shape around 'Battle" so it overlaps with the letters just once. It's getting hard to read there too.
    • Elisheba

      Feedback request for a portfolio piece.
      General Discussion • illustration critique feedback portfolio composition • • Elisheba  

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      Elisheba

      @aprilshin Thanks April! ️
    • phoenix yip

      Unfinished comp sketches for comic!
      Projects • illustration composition comic books comic • • phoenix yip  

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      phoenix yip

      @theprairiefox great! Thank you!
    • Georgios Christopoulos

      Hello Guys!Anyone with kids here that can relate to my artwork? :)
      Artwork • critique childrens book composition digitalart cartoon • • Georgios Christopoulos  

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      Annabishop

      @Georgios-Christopoulos Ah sorry I misunderstood your question! I agree with @TessaW, I think this style could work well for a mid-grade children's book (approx 8-12 years) but maybe not for younger kids. Depends what market you are aiming at really. I'm absolutely no children's book expert btw but I do work with children and as a result see lots of children's books.
    • phoenix yip

      Graphic Novel WIP
      Projects • thumbnails composition drawing comic books graphicnovel • • phoenix yip  

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      phoenix yip

      Thank you!
    • phoenix yip

      Comic book development
      Artwork • composition comic books storytelling • • phoenix yip  

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      @jaepereira I redid the panels a little. What do you think? Sorry, the opacity is low.
    • Dawn Lawson

      Value & Focus Feedback Wanted
      Artwork • composition characters valuestudy • • Dawn Lawson  

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      Dawn Lawson

      This a follow-up to a post I shared a little bit ago, but I want to make sure there are no competing contrasts. So, I'm posting the values of what I added so far. The theme is that both characters are under water. I want to keep the overall look of the characters: the woman's darker skin and the bird's two-tones. My goal, however, is to make sure that the viewer looks at the woman first. Am I succeeding? Am I on the right track? If anyone has input on areas I can improve, I'm open to suggestions
    • Dawn Lawson

      Composition Problem Solving - Help?
      Artwork • composition colorscheme • • Dawn Lawson  

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      MOO

      My eyes go to the woman's face first and then drop to the bird where they like to stay. So I am drawn to the bird more than the woman, I would say. I am wondering if you could add just a bit of white or color to the woman's hair, not much, but enough to bring my eyes back again since she is the main object you want to emphasize? I like the bluer sky in the first one in contrast to the woman, I think the woman pops more. Now, I just took another look and I think I am drawn back to the woman more than I thought so, I guess I don't really know what I'm talking about The yellow eyes are what draws mw back. I love the colors and it looks good!
    • Ashton H

      Working on a self published book!! Thoughts?
      Artwork • composition artwork environment self publisehd • • Ashton H  

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      animatosoor

      @Ashton-H Aw, this took me by surprise! Thank you, and it's equally inspiring to me that you're working on your own self-published art books. Keep going!
    • NelsonYiap

      Red Riding Hood - Composition Critique
      Artwork • critique feedback portfolio composition creative compo • • NelsonYiap  

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      NelsonYiap

      @sketchbook This looks amazing with the darkened tone, and the dramatic lighting, wow! Thank you all for your comments. I'll have another look at the piece. This is really great feedback
    • Jenny Dorf

      Composition Studies
      General Discussion • thumbnails composition studies master studies master copies • • Jenny Dorf  

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      Jenny Dorf

      @whitney-simms Good idea about finding my tribe. Thanks!
    • MissMushy

      Mushroom Village WIP
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      TessaW

      Great thumbnailing! When you narrow it down to the one you want to do, I'd encourage you to do thumbnails with a bunch of value variations.
    • mwinkelmans

      Need some help with a composition, please.
      Questions & Comments • composition need help with • • mwinkelmans  

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      sergio

      @mwinkelmans Top right. A bay window: It's not a capricious suggestion. A bay window is the perfect solution for what is proposed in the specifications. In short: I agree, in every point, with @bharris.
    • TamaraDomuzin

      Birthday Boy -Illustration feedback needed
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      Chip Valecek

      Very cute! The only thing that I would do is maybe make the cake bigger or and a candle to it. I really didn't notice the cake till I looked harder.