The first area I plan to redouble my efforts on, is my early sketches / exploration / and composition. I really get impatient to get on with inking and other aspects, and I know I could come up with stronger compositions, visual "story", etc...

Hey everybody, here are a couple paintings i've completed recently

Another artist/writer to check out is Craig Thompson the author of Habibi and Blankets. Amazing work!

Ah! Thats very good Carey! Thanks I will keep up the good work, and defantly change that and post a update so you guys can see. Thank you all hadn`t thought of that. love

Thank you Lynn - the polar bear in your profile picture is stunning. This community is awesome - I'm not going to watch the new Dave Malan video Ace

Hi Ben! Since others have mentioned color and mediums, I thought I might mention the pose. Right now the character is very off balanced, do to her stance, and the fact that her feet don't seem to be on the same plane. People normally stand with their weight shifted to one leg, which your character seems to be doing, but her leg is too far out to support her. Also, the above shoulder tends to come down towards the raised (weight bearing) hip in order to counter balance, but hers is going away from the hip instead. Since that sounds way too complicated written out I did a quick paintover to explain what I mean. Hope that helps!