Very cool!

@Fey-Realme Aww, well we're all here to support each other while we grow as artists 🎨 ❤

@Olivia-Yerxa sorry your request for critique has been overlooked. I think that is because you did a decent job of capturing the room in two-point perspective. The viewer certainly gets a sense of the space and the furniture in it.

For what it’s worth, I have a few suggestions you may want to consider.

First, your vanishing points are too close together causing the scene to be very dynamic and results in an extreme wide-angle lens effect. This is akin to placing a camera too close to a scene; it creates some distortion. In a bedroom scene it is often desirable to convey a calm and serene view. The fix is to move your VP’s quite a bit further apart.

Second, would be all of the circles are not aligned with an awareness of the perspective context you’ve created. The degree of foreshortening is not correct for each plane and the alignment of the minor diameter is not correct either. These are refinements but I think you see how they can lift your drawing to the next level.

Again, sorry you had to wait so long to get a reply.

@katiebee Nice work, it looks like you've already made a lot of improvement!

@Llumisky nice! That is a much better position.

@Llumisky try adding some details that make the room look lived in.

Here are my before and after houses for the "How to Draw Everything" course. There's definitely a lot of things to still learn and improve on (3-D and perspective 😰 ), but I do see a lot of growth already!
Here are the before & after:
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Plus a bonus house
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Hi!

I’m working on Assignment 2: People as Shapes from the Introduction to Gesture Drawing class. I've completed 12 out of the 20 required drawings so far. I’ve attached a few of the stronger ones from this batch and would greatly appreciate any constructive feedback you can offer. I’m eager to improve my skills and would value your insights.

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Here are the drawings. I’d love any feedback you have!

Thanks!

Hi @BetsyElam ! Analise here with SVS customer support😊 I can happily give you access to the zoom sessions. 🙂 Please email me at support@svslearn.com and we can get you watching in now time!

2 House drawings from the "How to Draw Everything" Class.
1st one before the class (in pencil) was done in 15 minutes.
Sorry, the 2nd one at the end of the class took 30 minutes - yeehaw - couldn't keep in the time zone.
Could probably revisit the combining of shapes such as cubes, triangle, and spheres.

Michael

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Debra Cootware744ff1e4-c13c-4968-8cac-720c4862a512-image.png This is my first post.
Work from the coarse Painting Light and Color. I finished this first frame of my book and was pretty happy, but in my next post you’ll see another frame had some problems. I’m thinking the black ink in this one is not so delicious. Maybe a light sienna?

@MiaNova The problem I see is that the vertical guidelines don't quite converge on a single point below, and the verticals in the drawing don't follow the guidelines. Here's a picture to show what I mean. If you adjust these, your drawing will look much more solid and believable. Good luck!
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@Sarah-VanDam I honestly don't think I've seen anyone other than pixar's inside out do "the floor is lava" so could be cool to see

@Sara_C Absolutely! And thank you Sara, that's so kind of you! I'm glad to hear it! 😊

@thomas-young thanks for the feedback, would you say that the door in general is to big or just the lower opened portion? It wasn’t intentional, I think I got some fisheye perspective going on there cause it’s getting out of my cone of vision

Hi everybody,
If you've read any of my other posts, you'll see that I've been focusing on refining my art style. Per the Finding your Art Style class, I've made a Pinterest board of favorite artists. I've made my own personal observations on what ties these pieces together, but I would like to know what you see, and also how you would render these not just traditionally, but in Procreate.
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I took Lee's advice and took out several pieces that I wanted to keep in, but was trying to be very selective.

As far as Master copies go, I started with Julianna Bíbor. You'll notice I left the piece unfinished because I kind of wanted feedback on what I had done so far since finishing it would be tedious and I didn't want to continue if I was going about it completely wrong!

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here is an illustration I tried to do in the same style. Same thing, what are your thoughts on how I can better imitate Julianna's style?

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I will be posting more of my master copies of different artists. Thanks so much for your feedback.

@J-Morgan-Looney remember there is no such thing as too much sugar in your cereal lol

Hi Ayesha, I have a quick question for you. Had you developed your style before you started the class? Your characters are great. I'm having such a hard time with the class, and I think it's because I don't have my style down yet.

@Monika-Biernacka this is great work, keep it up!

@davidhohn thank you for the encouragement. I really enjoyed this course and I'm excited to keep going. I plan on doing the entire curriculum, so I think I'll see you again in the Level 3 perspective courses. I tried another angle from the same plan -- I'm not sure I got the cat right but it was good to challenge myself with a point of view that was tricky for me. Looking forward to more practice with this kind of thing!IMG_8242.jpeg