Old & New WIP

[Chip Valecek]

@stringfellowart Huge difference. I have an issue with eyes, I love drawing them big which doesn't help the baby. I love the change. Thank you for the feedback.

[MOO]

@chip-valecek That's so sad But at least she got to hold the baby. The baby looks kind of skinny and the little hairs kind of look like antennae-it does look like a baby alien. I like he suggestions from stringfellowart. The grandma in the chair is great. I have a bit of trouble with putting grandma's in chairs as I've been working a little on my own Grandma project

[Johanna Kim]

@chip-valecek I like your idea a lot, and I also agree with @stringfellowart 's suggestion to have grandma waving goodbye or blowing a kiss. Actually, I think that blowing a kiss could look pretty sweet, and you could add little floating heart-kisses as well between grandma's ghost and the baby. You might try putting grandma-ghost rising up behind the chair and blowing kisses to baby. And baby could be catching the kisses in the air, and/or, bringing the kisses to her lips. Just a thought. Can't wait to see how this develops.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

Wow... unique concept. Is the grandmother a ghost?

[Chip Valecek]

@nyrryl-cadiz yes, she will be a ghost. Like the concept of an old person passing on while a new person starts their life.

[Chip Valecek]

@johanna-kim I actually had that same idea of the blowing a kiss and seeing the heart/kiss going toward the baby. I will get all of these suggestions added.

[Eli]

Really cool idea!

[Chip Valecek]

Getting the painting wrapped up this weekend. Any critiques or changes that need to be made before I submit? I have till Tuesday for any changes before I leave for a little spring break vacation.

[Gary Wilkinson]

@chip-valecek It might take a bit more work, but I think you would really benefit by adjusting the lighting. The right side of the image doesn't contribute much to the story and has quite high values which is needlessly pulling the viewer's eye that way. I think if you made the ghost a light source that would give it a much more dynamic feel.

[Chip Valecek]

@gary-wilkinson I see what you mean, i can see if i can make some of that with out taking to much time.

[Lee White]

cool idea, but the baby seems like a small adult female wearing lipstick. Gotta make it more "baby" still...

[Johanna Kim]

@chip-valecek (Hmm, I just tried to post a suggestion but it disappeared, so reposting...) The metal knitting needles are feeling a bit sharp and dangerous to me, stuck in the arm of the chair, and pointing somewhat towards the sleeping kitty. The kitty and yarn ball are also drawing my attention away from the main action.

A possible fix: Make the needles wood with rounded tips, and have them lying harmlessly on the floor where kitty is or on the arm of the chair, but enveloped partially in an unfinished knitting project, nothing too complex. Also, have kitty with the ball of yarn in its mouth, or under its paw, as if it was playing, but have it's attention directed at granny ghost. Both kitty and baby might be able to see granny ascend.

[Chip Valecek]

Thanks everyone for the feedback. I tried to take it all in and here is my final piece.