Critique on sketch
Hello SVS community. I've drifted away from art but I'm dipping my toe back in the pool with this sketch that I plan on making into a finished piece. I could use as an extra pair of eyes to look my sketch over and point out the flaws I'm unable to see.
Thanks in advance!
Heather Boyd last edited by Heather Boyd
Hi, SVS community responding . I only have a suggestion. Your wizard's scarf may add interest if both flying ends don't look almost identical. Maybe one catches the wind slightly differently (tilted more behind the other). Though I am not certain if this would be contrary to what would happen in reality (that's why it's a suggestion). That and his feet placement -seems very static (he might fall over (he's also creating a windy environment) because he's not grounded so well) -one leg ahead of the other and maybe with some bend.
Other than those I really quite like your character and his journey.
@IanS this is so cool. Reminds me a bit of Merlin from Sword in the stone... when he gets back from Bermuda.
Thanks @Heather-Boyd! I appreciate the help.
@Pamela-Fraley I haven't thought about the movie in years but your right. I can't look at it now without thinking about that scene. I'm going to have to re-watch that movie. It was one of my childhood fav's!
@IanS it’s my all time favorite Disney Movie. ️