24 Feb 2019, 17:21
@inkandspatter Yay! Great job! It's looking so good! I love what you did with the male bird. I think you made some really strong changes 
Love WIP
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@inkandspatter I think that in the first picture the bird's faces are definitely cuter and the bodies shaped a little better than the second, but in the second version the birds are more focused on each other and captures their emotions better. I hope that's helpful. Your picture looks really fun!
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@jennymwine @avfarrar That is very helpful! Maybe I don’t need to choose between them, but combine what I like from each!
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Ok, so here are my updated seagulls. Thank you so much to all of you for you advice, you have been an amazing help! Critiques welcome as always!
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Sorry i'm a little late but I also like the first one like you, it's definitely much better now that you've added the eyelids but i preferred it when the male seagulls' head was slightly to the side so you could see both eyes, you can give him eyebrows then to add to his smitten expression - like one up and one down eyebrow if you know what i mean? The female's face is brilliant
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@hannahmccaffery Thank you, I was focusing so much on the expression, I missed the second eye. Great idea with the eyebrows, I will give that a try!
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Linework finished!
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@inkandspatter Yay! Great job! It's looking so good! I love what you did with the male bird. I think you made some really strong changes
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@inkandspatter Looking good! The male bird's expression turned out great. The lower left and upper right bands on the life ring look a little off center to me. Might want to fix that if it wasn't intentional.
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Ohhh wow this is so awesome! Love the LUV BRD license plate too! Curious to see what colors you will use. Keep up the good work
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Here are my values for this composition. I don't have much experience with value studies, but I'm really hoping to improve my painting and colour skills, so I figure creating values studies before painting is probably a good habit to get into.
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This looks great! Love it!
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As I said before, I struggle with colour. So here are some colour studies I did for this comp, any feedback or advice is appreciated!
***The blue sky on number 2 should not be so vibrant - Procreate really sucks for exporting certain colours inaccuratley.
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@inkandspatter 2 has more colour contrast with the orange so I like that one the best! But perhaps the 3rd green hill in number 2 if that may work.
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@inkandspatter I agree with @Heather-Boyd I like 2. It stood out right away to me.
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@inkandspatter same as the other two here above :face_with_stuck-out_tongue: but I like the chemical waste dripping out in picture four alot as well. Maybe add some shadings underneath the rubble too to make it more 3D-ish?
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Here is my final, finished not perfect
Thank so much for all your feedback and help, I learned so much because of it!
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@inkandspatter Great job! This turned out nice.
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@inkandspatter It turned out great! Thank you for letting us come on your journey
