I love the chewing face on your guy! It's really funny and well rendered. I have a question for you to consider about your story- The apples are supposed to keep the doctor away, but he has a set date for a doctor's appointment on the calendar already. He's already going, so the apples aren't keeping the doctor away.

Is it worth doing a thumbnail where your story is focused on the doctor? Maybe he's trying to hide the apples in the supermarket, or stop an apple shipment because the apples are causing him to lose all his patients.

I really like your idea!

I thought it would be interesting to take an old Native American superstition that we now think of as silly, and to put it into a modern context. If having your photograph taken can steal your soul, that's a terrifying concept in selfie culture.

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@BichonBistro Thank you so much!

Hi SVS-ers!

For an illustration about a more obscure superstition, do you think a brief explanation should be posted on a boarder on the image, or just in a comment in the post?

Thanks!

Jenny

@KathrynAdebayo That's strange. I received an email from Lisa this morning with the link after I posted this question to the forum.

Try emailing their general support email address. I'll bet you get a pretty prompt response: support@svslearn.com

Hi friends! I'm excited for today's critique, but I can't figure out how to get the link to it.

I'm a subscriber, but my emails about the Summer Vacation critique session keeps saying, "Subscribe to get the event link."

Can someone help me out and let me know what I'm missing?

Thanks!

This is why it's so important to read reviews before renting a Summer house...

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@BichonBistro wow, thank you do much! What a nice compliment!

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