21 Feb 2019, 16:12

So here are my refined sketches. I removed the smokestacks and tried to really refine and simplify my composition. I am happy with where I am at with it now, but could use some fresh eyes and critiques!

The one thing I am still struggling with is which seagull characters to use. So far everyone has said the second, and I do really like the second, but the problem is that I feel like the first suit the tone of the composition much better. The simple design and somewhat dumb look on the seagulls in comp 1, suits what I picture as the final composition - a green/blue tinged smoggy atmosphere. The seagulls in comp one seem like they should be in a park or on a beach. But - I do like the look. Now I am really torn. Thoughts?

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