10 Sept 2018, 03:13

I am choosing to challenge myself and do a full mock spread on this topic. I want to enter into the children's book world and I am starting pull together a portfolio. So as far as this project goes I want to share my process and get some feed back as I go, rather than at the end when it is too hard to change. This is a really rough compilation of my sketchbook sketches pulled into photoshop so that I can figure out the composition. What do you think? Is it too busy? are there any major red flags that you see? Thank you in advance.
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