18 May 2017, 16:39
@evilrobot Really nice work William!!
My draw 50 things WIP
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This is looking great! It may just be me, but the tile lines on the floor seem a bit off. They work well with the boy but feel off when looking at the popcorn stand and the shelves behind the boy. I like the direction and look forward to seeing more!
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Think I'm calling it finished now
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@evilrobot Very good work!!! I think you nailed it! The only thing that is bugging me is what @Sarah-LuAnn pointed out... I think you are loosing a lot of storytelling by just having the guy standing there. Maybe he could be looking at his watch, exasperated that the boy is taking so long to decide what he wants ? Otherwise, great work!
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Sweet:-) I feel like eating some candy now
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All I have to say is that this is A M A Z I N G. Such great work!
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Solid work! @Will-Terry should be proud.
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@evilrobot Really nice work William!!
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Really nice work. I love how you placed the main character in a pool of light. Good job!
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@evilrobot this is really good!!! High level skill
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great looking scene here. Good looking line work and detail. One thing though, your 3rd vanishing point lines are all over the place. Make sure that 3rd point is far away and make sure everything goes to that point. Right now everything is drawn so well that the angles on that are really throwing it off.
Can't wait to see this finished!
