18 Jul 2021, 18:52

Hi @Janette, I really like the style and color choices!

If I pretended to be an art director offering a critique for SCBWI, I would say the following:

  1. The piece feels heavy on the right. Possibly add text to upper left to add narrative for storytelling.

  2. I’m not sure I understand what’s happening. Is the man selling his cat, or did he sell something already? He’s flipping a coin back, so…

  3. The cat is cute, but she looks like she’s hovering on outside of the mans arm. Should she be on the inside?

  4. You might consider lightening up the curvy road behind the man since his arms and neck almost bend in with the road.

Hope this helps. Also, just realized I probably shouldn’t offer feedback in this forum, so please let me know if you prefer I delete this post.