Hi @Janette, I really like the style and color choices!
If I pretended to be an art director offering a critique for SCBWI, I would say the following:
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The piece feels heavy on the right. Possibly add text to upper left to add narrative for storytelling.
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I’m not sure I understand what’s happening. Is the man selling his cat, or did he sell something already? He’s flipping a coin back, so…
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The cat is cute, but she looks like she’s hovering on outside of the mans arm. Should she be on the inside?
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You might consider lightening up the curvy road behind the man since his arms and neck almost bend in with the road.
Hope this helps. Also, just realized I probably shouldn’t offer feedback in this forum, so please let me know if you prefer I delete this post.