Our SVS Virtual Studio July ⛵️
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@demotlj this is beautiful!
@PieterVanDerBeek love the medal of honor!Here is some linework on a piece that serves as a warm up these last two days!
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Congratulations @Coreyartus! What a huge step setting up your business! Your calendar is beautiful!
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Hi @Janette, I really like the style and color choices!
If I pretended to be an art director offering a critique for SCBWI, I would say the following:
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The piece feels heavy on the right. Possibly add text to upper left to add narrative for storytelling.
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I’m not sure I understand what’s happening. Is the man selling his cat, or did he sell something already? He’s flipping a coin back, so…
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The cat is cute, but she looks like she’s hovering on outside of the mans arm. Should she be on the inside?
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You might consider lightening up the curvy road behind the man since his arms and neck almost bend in with the road.
Hope this helps. Also, just realized I probably shouldn’t offer feedback in this forum, so please let me know if you prefer I delete this post.
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@Janette This is so exciting! It looks great! Please drop a link when it's available!
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@Janette I had a similar image in my little self-published Amazon book. It was cool to see yours ("great minds..." kinda thing maybe
?). I love that angle! The bare light and pull string combo in the foreground really heighten that empty feel. Lovely work and congrats again!
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@Jeremy-Ross Yeah, I need to add text, becaise its the Crooked Man Nursery Rhyme, which would explain the image.
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@Jeremiahbrown Lovely work. Great light and shadow.
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@Coreyartus Bravo, this looks fantastic, really impressive stuff! I can't help but see your business soar (hehe) from here! Congratulations!
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@Janette Living the dream, way to go
I'm already loving how this is coming out. Keep on keeping on
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Cool @Janette! That will definitely balance it out.
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@kylebeaudette these are all awesome! This guy kind of reminds me of a more sophisticated version of the sneezes from Puff the Magic Dragon.
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@kylebeaudette I love it!
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This is a slow month for me - didn't manage to make much progress on my current projects but I wanted to share something funny about me in the "Virtual Studio" - this is my daily challenge for some years now, it entertains my family and friends, makes for a sort of family journal and keeps me drawing daily no matter what. The name is Porchi. (A screen capture of the album showing last two weeks drawings)
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