April contest WIP, feedback always appreciated :)



  • OKAY.

    Last month stuff went to hell, maybe this month I can spread the work out and not scramble to get something in a couple hours before the deadline (unprofessional conduct, sir!)

    So I tried to figure out kind of how a robot can malfunction, go wrong, etc. Going berserk, exploding and stuff seemed easy, so I decided to have a puggle robot suddenyl 'lay' eggs (gonna try and get that perfect squatty poop pose)

    So here's some character exploration and colour study πŸ™‚

    Feedback, as always, is appreciated. Feedback makes is all stronger. Super strong. Super DUPER strong. ULTIMATE COSMIC POW- ahem pardon me...

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  • I love these character designs! The line character and weight are really good! Can’t wait to see the end product!



  • Awesome characters and idea πŸ’‘



  • Just reading your concept made me laugh!! πŸ™‚
    Through its robot traits the pug is really cute!



  • Waaaaaaaahahahahahaha .... thats hilarious. Love it!



  • Thanks everyone πŸ™‚

    Work progresses!

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  • Ok, first off, I LOVE your style, and the concept for this picture!

    Only critiques I can think to give would be to consider framing the image a bit differently (see picture below). By adding that little bit more space above the dog, it puts both the girl and the dog in a nice top third-bordering-on-center area of the image, which I find to be more pleasing.
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    And to slightly shorten the strap on the girl's goggles. Even though they are supposed to be flying off, they look a slight bit too loose in my opinion to have been on properly.

    Again, love this piece and look forward to seeing the finished product!



  • Pure gravy so far, dude πŸ‘πŸΌ


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