Slowvember WIP



  • Hey all. I wanted to get a post up and for the most part to keep me honest so I'll actually follow through and spend the time to do it 🙂

    I've had 2-3 ideas in my head for some time that I thought would be a great time to try and get them out and into finished pieces. I've mentioned before I'm relatively new to coloring my art, so I'm really looking to push on those limitations. I feel like I struggle with dynamic range and contrast when it comes to coloring.

    The piece I'm thinking of is in a world I've wanted to build a bit more up of that's a feeling of Adventure Time meets Zelda where there is danger and monsters and magic but there are people trying to carve out a basic living. My daughter and I watch a lot of cartoons together, and I wanted to develop a character that was this tough as nails adventurer girl that just gets it done.

    The scene in my mind is that to help a good friend that has been mortally injured, she's heard rumors that the spirit of the forest can heal ailments that kill most people. She's ventured into the deepest forest and has finally found the spirit.



  • Some of the thumbnail compositions I've been toying with. I'm still not 100% sure what the spirit is going to be. I've toyed with the idea of it being a female, fairy, moth, and a stag. I liked the idea of a stag - maybe something akin to Harry Potter's patronus.

    And I decided she's going to have a dog-like companion.

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    @jdubz These are nice thumbnails and any of them could work. To get more specific feedback from people, try adding in key words and how you want the image to come across. What should the viewer think when they see this image. That is how you go from a lot of usable thumbnails to the BEST thumbnail for the job.



  • @Lee-White Thanks Lee - good direction advice. I'll think about this in more detail and try and come up with some more pertinent comments.

    Off the top of my head, I was trying to think of the forest itself being very dark and had a sinister overtone, but having this awesome (as in literally awe-inspiring) being in it. I wanted it to have some contrasting surprises, which is why I thought to use a moth, or even a silk worm or frog or something that people wouldn't have first thought of as a mystical being. The "glowing ghosty girl in the flowing dress" seems to be the obvious trope in this scenario 🙂

    I kind of wanted you to see the girl in some detail to get some of her personality and maybe add some details about how the trip through the forest wasn't all roses. But I didn't want to make that a "must have" if the image would be better for not having her be as detailed (as in some of the more zoomed out shots). I'm trying to take to heart the idea that less can be more. I can definitely over detail things and they can be a mess.



  • Still exploring some stylistic decisions, specifically with the characters because I want to be consistent with the feel. I've just been scribbling some different character style types to try and see what feels right. Here are some of those - I'm kind of going to extremes on these where it's a bit more life-life moving down the line to almost a "cal art" style.

    sophie.jpg

    Few more here:

    sophie2.jpg



  • I sketched out a couple more ideas and I really liked the direction this felt like it was going...

    sophie3.jpg



  • So cool! It' giving me serious Princess Mononoke vibes; specifically reminding me of the Shishigami.


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    @jdubz Nice! From a sheer compositional standpoint I like the stag on the hill and the one below it with the "fairy butterfly." Every read the stag passage in Wind in the Willows? It has some of that, only not sinister.

    As for the girl, I rather like the first one, but I don't really know what your style is. Good start!



  • @LauraA @Daisy Thanks for the feedback. I haven't read Wind in the Willows so I'll check that out. I do remember watching Princess Mononoke a while back and that's definitely a style I was trying to emulate back in my early college days. But it's been super long so maybe I need go watch it again.

    "I rather like the first one, but I don't really know what your style is"

    This is kind of the conundrum for me. I'm not precisely sure what my style is either. It seems I default to 2 or 3 different stylistic looks depending on the subject matter.

    Thanks for the comp feedback. Originally I was kind of thinking the stag coming down and she was reaching out, but I tried to refine that one and it just didn't feel like it was working at all so I think you're right and I'll refine one of those next at least to a stage where I can see it moving forward.


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