Indoor scenes, critiques welcome.

  • @hannahmccaffery thank you for the comments. This is really helpful. For the superhero kid image, I get what you mean by too much wall and shelves. I will play around the placement of bed and other furnitures. Yes. it is not a typical boy's room. It is part of the story - the boy is into what normally considered girly things. The text never says that, but I want to communicate this through image. I am glad you read it as NOT a typical boy's room.

    In the pirate piece, I want to communicate that the kids have been playing around with everything in the room, things are not aligned because they have been messing around witht all the furniture. But if you find it odd with the angles, I probably should go in and play around a bit mroe, see if I can come up with a different solution.

    Again, thank you.

  • @xin-li I agree with @hannahmccaffery about the plants. To me the plants make the room read more like a living room than a bedroom. To me, a potted plant or a vase of fresh flowers would require too much attention and maintenance to belong in a small kid's bedroom.

    I don't think it's the placement of the objects in the pirate scene, it's the perspective. (excuse the poor draw over) Going off the perspective of the box, you would need to see a lot more of the bottom side of the shelves. It's also tricky to mix things in 1 and 2 point perspective. I'm pretty sure the way I've done it is not right. Hopefully someone can correct me.

    I really love the way these are headed though. You have a very strong sense of character and gesture. Really good stuff!


  • @StudioLooong thanks for draw over. It is a good start for me to play around. It does look more correct already with adding the bottom side of the shelves.

    It is interesting about the plants, I have not thought about that would make the room more like a living room. I guess I will try to replace the plants with unicorn, big fluffy pillows or something :-). Thank you.

  • @StudioLooong @xin-li that's the word I was looking for, perspective! Not angles haha!

  • wow! I really love them. I like your playful characters and furniture. I am pretty sure you're on the right track!
    I think just like others, I also thought it's a living room instead of a bedroom because of the plants. Maybe can put like toys, soccer ball, or something else on the top of the cupboard instead of flowers in the vase. Just need to give a little bit personality to the bedroom 😀
    can't wait to see more!

  • @StudioLooong this is very helpful

  • Trying to get "Dress Up" piece done before the SCBWI monthly deadline. I Am struggling with value and color on this piece, but manage to make osme progress. Any thoughts?


  • @xin-li I like number 3 the most

  • I like #3 as well.

  • These are awesome! 2 is my fav.

  • Doing the final push on this piece, still hoping to finish it today. I toned down the color for the background, trying to make the character stand out more.
    I found myself keep feeling that the tight painting lost some of the inital enegy. I am also not sure if the background is a bit too busy, even though I kept things farely low contrast.

    Any thoughts?

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  • Hi 🙂 I really like the concept of this, and the characters are looking great!

    I think the characters and the chair are standing out well from the background now, but the sword and the books the chair is standing on could be darker or outlined to separate more from the background and be more grouped with the children.

    There is something about the box with the doll in it that is not quite working for me, it’s maybe a little stiff, less energetic and low contrast compared to the rest of the image.

    The background looks very nice, but I think that right now it is a bit more «in focus» than the foreground, because the linework is more prominent than in some of the elements in the foreground. Maybe either adding linework in the foreground, or remove/tone down more in the background would help? 🙂

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    @karolifo thank you for the comments. I made some more progress, Added more line work in the forground. Hope this balance it out with the background. I might need to adjust the lines on the character to be a bit more prominent, and maybe adding more details on the characters.

    I think I might have to redrew the box with doll, you are right - it is kind of stiff.

    Thank you for helping out.

  • @xin-li I think you’ve managed to keep a lot of the energy in the original sketch, but it always seems like a little is lost, doesn’t it? For some reason, maybe because there are a lot of angles in papers, boxes, etc, I like the curved legs on the chair in the sketch—it’s such a minor detail that I wouldn’t bother if it’s a pain to change. I also like the boy’s wider mouth in the sketch—he looks more engaged with it. I find environments very challenging and yours is fun to look at!

  • @BichonBistro thank you for the feedback. It is always very helpful to have other people take a look of the piece I am working on. I definitely will give another try on the facial expression on the boy. It is just going to be where people first.

    I will see if I have time to work on a bit more of the sofa leg. I agree that the curved line look for interesting.

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    @StudioLooong It's sort of a tricky scene to figure out vanishing points and things like that. Its a somewhat stylized approach, so realism rules don't fit perfectly here. But there are some clues on how to solve it within the image. If you look at the floor plane, it's perfectly horizontal to the viewer. That means that you would use a 1 point perspective for the room itself. Since the shelves are also part of that box, it would also fall within the 1 point perspective. Anything within the room that is rotated would turn into a 2 point perspective like you have drawn on the box. Hope that makes sense. : )

    That said, I like the finish that she chose better than using the vanishing points. Nice work @xin-li!


  • @Lee-White thank you so much for explaining the rule of perspective in this context. I looked up some video tutorials, I think I understood the principles of 1 point and 2 points perspective, I just did not know how to apply them here. :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes: I think I will have a better idea next time.

    It is interesting how much I can get away from realism rules by focus on the emotion of the image. That said, maybe I should familiarise myself more with perspectives - a good tool to have in my artist toolbox.

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    Call this one done for now. As a tradition, I am sure I will go back and fiddle with it later :-). Thank you so much for the help along the way.

  • Hi Xin Li,

    I wanted to comment that I absolutely LOVE the sketch you did of "Tim liked the red cape very, very much!" It has such a great energy and flow across the page. That is the illustration that I am longing to read the story about. If you had the inclination to finish that one I think you'd have a fantastic piece for your portfolio.

    While I like your pirate illo, the cape illo sings to me and touches my heart. 🥰


  • Love where you took it! Turned out great! Well done!

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