that pencil sketch I do takes care of about 75% of the work for me, once it's in photoshop it's basically like doing a very complicated coloring book page.
12 Jul 2019, 10:49
This works really well as spread with text, it's balanced really nicely on each side, and looks much better now that you've moved the frog away from the smoke 
Another small suggestion, maybe move the frog that has dived into the water in front of the boat so all the characters are spread out a little bit more and it would fill a bit more of that water space.
I agree that the bottom left corner needs some kind of larger foliage there (not too much that its distracting), just so we can get a sense of depth, and maybe the horizon line of the water should be straight? It's catching my eye that it's higher on the right! But apart from that I think you have a really strong piece here and i can't wait to see it in colour 