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    • JerrySketchyArt
      JerrySketchyArt last edited by

      I like #6 personally.

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      • Kevin Longueil
        Kevin Longueil SVS OG @ThisKateCreates last edited by

        @ThisKateCreates They are all nice - i do like 9 the best - maybe with a slightly larger heart element?

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        • ThisKateCreates
          ThisKateCreates last edited by

          Expanded ten and not super excited for it. But the close crop does have a nice design and bring you in. Hmmm.
          jellyfish sketch2.png

          I'll play a bit more before going forward. >_>

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            yeungtina @ThisKateCreates last edited by

            Personally, I like the overlap in 4 and 11. The hearts read a little literal but I think the coloring could help sell it if you decide to go that way. Love the overall concept!

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            • ThisKateCreates
              ThisKateCreates last edited by

              The more sketching I do the harder it is for me to choose....
              jellyfish sketch3.png

              https://www.instagram.com/thiskatecreates

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              • ThisKateCreates
                ThisKateCreates last edited by

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                • JerrySketchyArt
                  JerrySketchyArt last edited by

                  I noticed their forms kind of form a heart around them naturally. Might want to consider framing them with a bit of an off angle heart since you said they are emitting light? Kind of like this:

                  20190227_183322.jpg

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                  • JerrySketchyArt
                    JerrySketchyArt @ThisKateCreates last edited by

                    @ThisKateCreates As for the ones you posted, I personally like the contrast and negative space of 8 and 9.

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                    • ThisKateCreates
                      ThisKateCreates @JerrySketchyArt last edited by

                      @SketchyArtish The original thought was they formed a glowing heart but didn't quite hit it yet. hmmmm

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                      • ThisKateCreates
                        ThisKateCreates last edited by

                        Finish is going kind of sideways. May have to start over on paint. Hope I can get it in today!
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                        • Coreyartus
                          Coreyartus Moderator last edited by

                          This is developing nicely! I wonder if you might increase the value range a bit, making the lights lighter and the darks a bit darker. Contrast always makes a picture pop.

                          But the thing that I think you're going for here is a phosphorescent glow effect. There are lots of ways to accomplish that, especially if you're using Photoshop and you don't mind watching YouTube vids. Here's one example that demonstrates a couple ways:

                          https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vBlnP8oHGuA

                          Perhaps you could experiment with some different layer styles of glowing highlights? That might go a long way to increasing the contrast in your image IF that's something you think needs to happen. Just a thought! 🙂

                          Children's Illustration Portfolio: https://www.coreyartusillustration.com
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