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    • ThisKateCreates
      ThisKateCreates last edited by

      I may do a few sketches and decide then. The jellyfish are supposed to glow to help light each other's way in the dark. The original comp had text to that effect. I liked 16 or one with a heart but going kind of art nouveau with the strings. Someone else like 9 so I sketched it initially. See what I can knock out in time. XD

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      • JerrySketchyArt
        JerrySketchyArt last edited by

        I like #6 personally.

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        • Kevin Longueil
          Kevin Longueil SVS OG @ThisKateCreates last edited by

          @ThisKateCreates They are all nice - i do like 9 the best - maybe with a slightly larger heart element?

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          • ThisKateCreates
            ThisKateCreates last edited by

            Expanded ten and not super excited for it. But the close crop does have a nice design and bring you in. Hmmm.
            jellyfish sketch2.png

            I'll play a bit more before going forward. >_>

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              yeungtina @ThisKateCreates last edited by

              Personally, I like the overlap in 4 and 11. The hearts read a little literal but I think the coloring could help sell it if you decide to go that way. Love the overall concept!

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              • ThisKateCreates
                ThisKateCreates last edited by

                The more sketching I do the harder it is for me to choose....
                jellyfish sketch3.png

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                • ThisKateCreates
                  ThisKateCreates last edited by

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                  • JerrySketchyArt
                    JerrySketchyArt last edited by

                    I noticed their forms kind of form a heart around them naturally. Might want to consider framing them with a bit of an off angle heart since you said they are emitting light? Kind of like this:

                    20190227_183322.jpg

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                    • JerrySketchyArt
                      JerrySketchyArt @ThisKateCreates last edited by

                      @ThisKateCreates As for the ones you posted, I personally like the contrast and negative space of 8 and 9.

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                      • ThisKateCreates
                        ThisKateCreates @JerrySketchyArt last edited by

                        @SketchyArtish The original thought was they formed a glowing heart but didn't quite hit it yet. hmmmm

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                        • ThisKateCreates
                          ThisKateCreates last edited by

                          Finish is going kind of sideways. May have to start over on paint. Hope I can get it in today!
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                          • Coreyartus
                            Coreyartus Moderator last edited by

                            This is developing nicely! I wonder if you might increase the value range a bit, making the lights lighter and the darks a bit darker. Contrast always makes a picture pop.

                            But the thing that I think you're going for here is a phosphorescent glow effect. There are lots of ways to accomplish that, especially if you're using Photoshop and you don't mind watching YouTube vids. Here's one example that demonstrates a couple ways:

                            https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vBlnP8oHGuA

                            Perhaps you could experiment with some different layer styles of glowing highlights? That might go a long way to increasing the contrast in your image IF that's something you think needs to happen. Just a thought! 🙂

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