February Love - Critiques please! Thank you!
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This is so cute! I love the pig! To me, it looks like the shape and shadow of the ice cream cone are off a little. The bottom of the cone is looking a little flat and the shadow should be rounder and more down and to the left (to match the direction of the shadow on the pillow).
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Oh my goodness, that's good.
There might be some melted ice cream left in the cone too, or on the rim where it dripped onto the floor. -
@lisanganart looks nice, maybe you could change the colour of the ice cream as its the same as the pig. Just a thought
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@lisanganart - OMG wow! I adore this piece.
As for feedback, I think the ice cream cone rim shadow (based on the shadows on the pig) may need to be a bit more horizontal and then also overlapping on the spilled cream a bit. I can't quite put my finger on it but the spilled ice cream shape looks a bit flat - perhaps you could add some glossiness or texture to convey more of the "wetness" of the cream?
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@lisanganart adorable! I like the rendering—the light on the pillow looks really good.
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@StudioLooong @KathrynAdebayo @Jason-Bowen @djly @yeungtina Thank you so much for stopping by with your comments and suggestions
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