That's so awesome, congratulations!!

@Whitney-Simms - I love your patterns, beautiful!

Wow, I can't believe how far this piece came. You've really worked hard on this and it shows. Really beautiful work, you should be proud!

@rachelpenman - A very nice illustration of this story.

The alignment of the monkeys torso with the legs seem to be a bit off. His right leg doesn't seem in quite the right alignment with the way he is reaching for the little girl.

For the little girl, I think the proportions as @Taigyo mentioned. I also think that for the direction she is facing toward the monkey there might be a bit more twist in her body and I'm not seeing the pinch on the right side indicating that twist.

I agree with @Chip-Valecek - the buildings are really nice! I hope this helps.

@mag - also if you want to post an "about me" draft here, happy to take a look!

Hello Mag!

Here is my feedback:

does it look professional?
I think it reads pretty professionally. Only suggestion would be to increase the font size of the menu bar so it is a bit easier to see/click. Also, I'd make the titles of the menu bar both start with capital letters as they are titling something, so instead of "My books" use "My Books".

I don't have the "about me" page, because I have absolutely no idea what to write about my self. Do you think that would be a problem? Or does the site works without this page?
I think it would be helpful to have an about me page. It makes you a bit more relatable to know a little more about you personally but you could also write a bit about your preferred mediums, etc. Maybe taking a glance at other well-known illustrators would be helpful. I like Jake Parker's website and he has a nice about me section for reference: https://www.mrjakeparker.com/about

Is there a picture in my portfolio you would withdraw? I have emotions and memories attached to almost all of the illustrations, so I might not be the best person to decide what to dismiss...
The only illustration that I questioned was the comic strip. I don't think it is necessarily the wrong piece to add if you are interested in also doing comics, but if you are not, that was the only piece I questioned not really aligning with the others.

I have multiple styles represented on my website. Is it a good thing or a bad thing?**
I'm a total newbie and so I might not be the best to answer this question. However, I think I would ask the question about what type of work you hope to get and do those images resonate with those goals?

I hope this helps!

"Snow White"
Name: Donella Ly
March Prompt Book Cover Entry:

@Chip-Valecek - You are always great at bringing your own style into very iconic stories/films. Really beautifully done - it looks like you created your own font for the title which suits this cover so nicely.

My only feedback would be the plane. It seems to me that the tail and the head of the plane are not aligned quite right. I think if you were to bring the head over to align a bit better with the tail it would read a bit better.

Otherwise, as always, love your work!

@demotlj - could one of the spectators be holding binoculars and you can then see the butterfly? Just a thought :-).

@nyrrylcadiz - maybe you could do the bottom left but incorporate some of the planets into the landscape to make it more interesting - if you are concerned about it being cliche?