I'm new to SVS - Starting it off with some concept art!

avfarrar

I joined the forum earlier this month and I'm really excited about it. Decided that it would be fun to start out showing you all some concept art I sketched out for my brother's project for a Redwall game. Let me know what you think!
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reddprime

Welcome to the forum!
Your concept art is good Looking forward to seeing how the completed game ready characters look.

Nyrryl Cadiz

Really cool!

kaitlinmakes

Oh man! So cool!
I like the second Matthias - it just makes him look younger and kind of clumsy, which if I remember right was how he started out.
So glad you shared these

Chip Valecek

@avfarrar welcome to the forums. Looking forward to seeing these characters develop.

Welcome to the forum! Cool characters, especially the one in the cloak look forward to seeing more of your work!

braden H

Aw man, I remember redwall!

Somewhere in my old sketchbooks there's a bunch of character designs a lot like these

I'm a big fan of Shadow's design.

I dunno why, but I always imagined Cluny as much more feral/animalistic. Your take still looks wonderfully fierce, though

avfarrar

@Braden-Hallett Thanks! I love the feedback from you all. :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_smiling_eyes: Hey, and feel free to give me more. I honestly hadn't put a lot of time into these pictures yet.

robgale

Great stuff! Looking forward to see more! Any thoughts on what kind of feedback you're looking for?

avfarrar

@robgale Hmm... Good question. Maybe feedback on how to make the characters more interesting and more like individuals I quess. For example, I really liked Braden Hallett's sudgestion because it helps me to make Cluny's picture more refined to like he really is (I tend to make characters friendlier than they really are ).

avfarrar

But, any critiques are welcome.