Congrats That is great!

Hi all, I have been struggling with the next page, I have started and been on it for a few weeks, which feels like an eternity.
So page 4 has Finn waking up after being knocked out. We see the top of the cave he is in, then he sees two characters starting at him. From there, I want to show him sitting up all confused and then, a close-up shot of him trying to figure out what has just happened, how did he go from a fish in a tank, to a fish being attacked, waking up in a cave with these two new characters around him.

I would really appreciate some advice on how to illustrate and portray this, please.

Great episode. Love these, just want more and more from you three.
Just a note, I often hear an echo from Jake and Will's mics, is this me, or does anyone else have this? I often find it distracting, but thankfully does not distract too much from the overall messages.

My goal with all my art is that if it makes at least one person smile, and have a better day, then it has accomplished more than I could hope for.

@BenBernardSmith Hey! Thanks for the feedback. So the plan is to create some confusion in this panel, why does he look different in from here on in that he did in the previous pages? I want the audience to experience the confusing Finn was experiencing as this unfolded, but it gets explained soon.

@avfarrar This makes total sense! Thanks for the input, it makes more sense than the green light I was using

@Aleksey Hey! I am using Wordpress for mine. There are some really useful webcomic themes that make life extremely easy.

Finished up page 3 about a week ago, this one was a challenge. I was never happy with the illusion of movement that I needed for the claw slash.

Please let me know what you think. I am about to start the next page.

This was a great podcast, really got me thinking about all my failures.

Mine was in primary school, I remember my art and culture teacher failing me and telling me that I would never be an artist.
I went on to study fine art where my lecturers were not supportive of my character design, they did not see it as real art.
I decided to show them all that all they have done is motivate me to work harder.

When I finished studying, I went back to that primary school teacher and gave them a drawing from my studies, at first I wanted to prove him wrong, but it was more of a thank you for making me more motivated to work on my craft.

I have had loads of failures since then, but they have all taught me something, and have motivated me to be a better artist.

Happy Monday everyone!
I have almost completed the third page of FishTails. From page 3 one they will all be on my site: https://reddprime.com/comics/

I do need some suggestions on how to make some female characters.

Welcome to the forum!
Your concept art is good Looking forward to seeing how the completed game ready characters look.