1 Nov 2018, 02:04
I like B too. The slime is really fun. There should be more slime in kids books!
Misunderstood Monster (vote)
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So I already submitted my piece but I wanted to get some feedback from the community. This year for inktober I stuck to using a black line with a white border line. I got some positive feedback on it, so I wanted to do this months contest piece in the same style to see if it would work for a full illustration. So I would like your votes on option A or B. Thanks!
Option A (style of my inktobers):
Or Option B (no ink splatters or white border):
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@chip-valecek I vote B. I like the look of your piece here. I think the glowing slime glows better without the white outlines. Fun concept too.
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B, Cool idea! A looks a little like a cut out to me.
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I like B best, too. The white line just adds a little confusion for me.
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I think in this case option B works best, here.
They're both good, but I'd definitely go with the version without outlines.
Maybe softer outlines? Like on their own layer at 30% opacity using a nice green-ish colour?
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I like B too. The slime is really fun. There should be more slime in kids books!
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I think style A has potential to look like a 3D layered paper style and is worth exploring. It reminded me of these 3D Magic cards some people make with several cutout layers to give it depth:
Or Paper Mario! It could be a fun look.
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Wow Chip, I really love how this one turned out! The color palette, linework, and subtle texture are really appealing. I first viewed this on my phone and liked A initially, but after looking at it on my desktop, I'm leaning toward B. I am sort of wondering what it would look like with the dark splatters on A, but without the white outlines. Something about those splatters gives it a lot of energy and interest.
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I vote for B, although I do like the splatters.
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I want to like A but Iām going to vote B.
This turned out really good.
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I like B too.
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They both great! but I prefer B
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