9 Apr 2018, 12:20
What a beautiful first try into digital! Best of luck to you!
Very first digital art, critiques/comments welcome
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What a beautiful first try into digital! Best of luck to you!
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I really like it!
Before I throw some thoughts out there, Is this cropped from a larger image?
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@adrian-k wow for your first time doing it, its pretty amazing! It took me years to get anywhere with digital art and still learning.
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@art-of-b said in Very first digital art, critiques/comments welcome:
I really like it!
Before I throw some thoughts out there, Is this cropped from a larger image?
Updated for clarity. no not croped, I did a few thumb nails and determined if I wanted to maintain any detail on the mouse it needed to be a closer more intamit view. Although in my original thumbnail I did draw the entire fox for correct proportion
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Cool! I would do a draw-over but I'm away from my tablet...
I would either remove the fox's tail entirely, or give it more of a presence in the picture. A dark, close up for a tail right up against the viewer in the foreground might be neat. However where it is right now it takes a few moments to decode (at least for me).
I would try and identify and remove any tangents in the piece (where the mouse's tail brushes against the fox's, and where the mouse's left paw intersects with the background).
Overall a really neat piece, though! I like it
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@art-of-b thank you, I can see what you’re saying, I’ll make the corrections
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Lovely the animals are beautifully painted
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Alright, so here are the revisions. I think it reads a bit better now. I'm open to any other thoughts.
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@adrian-k Stunning image. It feels like an oil painting to me. Love your textures. It's a great piece already, but if you want heighten the drama and focus, I'd darken the fox a bit which will let further enhance the spotlight on the mouse. Right now, everything-- the mouse, flower and fox-- is getting my attention.
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@adrian-k This is your first work? This is unbelievable! Very amazing! My first work was nothing better than garbage (hehe) keep up the good work.
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@nyrryl-cadiz said in Very first digital art, critiques/comments welcome:
@adrian-k This is your first work? This is unbelievable! Very amazing! My first work was nothing better than garbage (hehe) keep up the good work.
Thank you. I did take about 2 weeks to just play with brushes and familiarize myself with the program. It probably shows that my approach is very traditional, and it’s not like I’ve never picked up a paint brush before
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@nyrryl-cadiz said in Very first digital art, critiques/comments welcome:
@adrian-k This is your first work? This is unbelievable! Very amazing! My first work was nothing better than garbage (hehe) keep up the good work.
Though I hate loosing detail (that’s where I usually lose my self) here’s the revision pulling the fox back into the shadows more.
