16 Jul 2017, 05:49
Number 1. Can't wait to see this one!
Independent WIP
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Work in progress so far. Not sure which of these two to go with.
Story: little boy decided to make his own cereal. Cereal all over the floor, spilled milk, eating out of frying pan with a wooden spoon. Mom wakes up and finds the mess.
#1 close up of the boy and you only see the leg of the mom in her fuzzy slippers.
#2 wider shot with the mom in the scene. Plan on putting a chair in there to indicate boy climbed up on it to get milk off top shelf and open drawers with stuff sticking out.
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I like #1, reminds me of Tom and Jerry just seeing the legs.
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like 1 best. All of the focus is on our little chef, and his personal story. the second option feels like there could be retribution and muddies up the message a bit. What a fun idea!
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I vote #1 as well.
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I agree #1.
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Number 1. Can't wait to see this one!
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@evilrobot Looking good! my vote is for number one also but maybe with number two's head - i'm having trouble with the scale of the milk jug in relation to the boy and in relation to the woman in number one though...maybe go with a carton instead? hope you don't mind me mucking about on your drawing - here is a quick cut and paste of what i was thinking
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Another vote for number 1. so cute!!
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Number 1, but how Kevin has told, with the baby looking up.
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Was thinking maybe if the handle of the pan was pointed at the mom a bit more and not in line with the cereal box it might lead the eye better - this might also give room to show where the baby's other foot is - a bit early for this kind of feedback maybe....Looking forward to seeing you work on this
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Thanks for all the comments and for the advise
Here's the line drawing I came up with. 
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@evilrobot This looks great to me! Really nicely done.
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Wow, you have really strong design and drawing skills. This looks amazing.
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Came out great. Do you plan on coloring it?
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@evilrobot Superb. Color?
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Super!!! I love it!
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I like it.