Independent WIP

[evilrobot]

Work in progress so far. Not sure which of these two to go with.

Story: little boy decided to make his own cereal. Cereal all over the floor, spilled milk, eating out of frying pan with a wooden spoon. Mom wakes up and finds the mess.

#1 close up of the boy and you only see the leg of the mom in her fuzzy slippers.

#2 wider shot with the mom in the scene. Plan on putting a chair in there to indicate boy climbed up on it to get milk off top shelf and open drawers with stuff sticking out.

[Chip Valecek]

I like #1, reminds me of Tom and Jerry just seeing the legs.

[WithLinesOfInk]

like 1 best. All of the focus is on our little chef, and his personal story. the second option feels like there could be retribution and muddies up the message a bit. What a fun idea!

[TessaW]

I vote #1 as well.

[stringfellowart]

I agree #1.

[bnewman]

Number 1. Can't wait to see this one!

[Kevin Longueil]

@evilrobot Looking good! my vote is for number one also but maybe with number two's head - i'm having trouble with the scale of the milk jug in relation to the boy and in relation to the woman in number one though...maybe go with a carton instead? hope you don't mind me mucking about on your drawing - here is a quick cut and paste of what i was thinking

[DOTTYP]

Another vote for number 1. so cute!!

[Jose Ramos]

Number 1, but how Kevin has told, with the baby looking up.

[Kevin Longueil]

Was thinking maybe if the handle of the pan was pointed at the mom a bit more and not in line with the cereal box it might lead the eye better - this might also give room to show where the baby's other foot is - a bit early for this kind of feedback maybe....Looking forward to seeing you work on this

[evilrobot]

Thanks for all the comments and for the advise Here's the line drawing I came up with.

[Kevin Longueil]

@evilrobot This looks great to me! Really nicely done.

[TessaW]

Wow, you have really strong design and drawing skills. This looks amazing.

[RobinSlee]

Came out great. Do you plan on coloring it?

[bnewman]

@evilrobot Superb. Color?

[NoWayMe]

Super!!! I love it!

[Jose Ramos]

I like it.