Quick "Robot Gives" piece I did today before work, thoughts?

  • So this took me about 3 hours. I wanted to finish a piece this morning before coming into work and this is what I came up with, what are your thoughts/suggestions for future stuff like this?

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    @jason-kilthau Thats great for 3 hours! The colors seem a little flat, maybe a little more saturation but that is personal preference on my side. I would also try to vary some of the line weight, it seems to be the same weight through out the piece.

  • This is a fun piece! I also tend to prefer more saturated colors, but you maybe going for something different. How about a bit of shading for the eye?

  • This is excellent, thank you @Chip-Valecek and @TessW I'll be looking into color saturation over my weekend and I'll see about adjusting this piece in particular. And as for Eye shading, I definitely would have but I totally forgot so I'll touch that up when I attempt to saturate colors.

    @Chip-Valecek I see what you're saying about the lineweight, that is one of those things I have to be thinking about otherwise I am totally oblivious to it. My pen/Tablet is pressure sensitive so some of them on the inside of say the tree may come out thin but if they are one stroke they tend to be the same thickness, as the robot is. But I can see where they can be thinner.

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