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    • Nazuba
      Nazuba last edited by

      Hi guys, I am looking for a story for this picture to tell. I only have two emotions that I would like to associate in the story which are "cold" and "lonely". I cannot think of anything. Can anyone please add a story to this image so that I can further work on this piece?
      This is a WIP

      0_1478431790191_lonely-street-cropped.jpg

      https://www.dribbble.com/nazuba
      https://www.instagram.com/nazubahere/

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      • Doha
        Doha last edited by

        Your style here is very beautiful.
        It does give the feeling of a sad, and lonely place. I can see a lost pet or a lost kid.
        I can also see ghosts in here (maybe a lonely ghost sitting on the dumpster).

        Doha Koma

        www.Komaart.net
        https://www.instagram.com/dohakomart/
        https://www.facebook.com/dohakoma/

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        • Nazuba
          Nazuba @Doha last edited by

          @Doha Thank you so much! I also posted this on SVS facebook page and someone said "No matter how hard she tried, Yani could not forget that day"
          So yes, a lonely child. Now you said a ghost. Maybe they meet here?
          I am pretty scared of character design though...

          https://www.dribbble.com/nazuba
          https://www.instagram.com/nazubahere/

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          • Doha
            Doha last edited by

            That is a nice concept. I can definitely see them together.
            good luck with the C.D. it's always a fun process.
            looking forward to see the finish painting.

            Doha Koma

            www.Komaart.net
            https://www.instagram.com/dohakomart/
            https://www.facebook.com/dohakoma/

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            • amberwingart
              amberwingart last edited by

              What a lovely start - as Doha said, you've got a great depiction of a sad and lonely place. I can also see a stray dog here or a homeless man.

              Perhaps a homeless man sharing his blanket and a can of food with his dog?

              "No matter what life threw at them, Harvey and Smokey always knew they had each other. And that made all of the bad things a little less bad and all of the sad things a little less sad."

              That's what came to my mind. I'm looking forward to seeing this finished!

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              • Nazuba
                Nazuba @amberwingart last edited by

                @amberwingart Thanks so much for the reply! A man and a dog comes first in mind when I see a dumpster anyway lol. I personally think the girl and the ghost is a bit more interesting although I have no idea how I will execute it.

                https://www.dribbble.com/nazuba
                https://www.instagram.com/nazubahere/

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                • Lee White
                  Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by Lee White

                  ha! it's so funny how a theme can become public once you start thinking about it. I was asked to illustrate a story about a girl who sees ghosts around London so I am developing some imagery on this theme too.

                  Here's a quick paint on how I would handle it.

                  0_1478637349519_1478431795903-lonely-street-cropped.jpg

                  SVS Faculty Instructor
                  www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                  • natiwata
                    natiwata SVS OG last edited by natiwata

                    "It was dark inside, and smelled like coffee grounds and old bananas, but at least no one would see Annabelle crying."

                    Lovely illustration, really nice atmosphere/mood. Made me think what if you made almost an entire book without seeing the main character? Actually the book "Shy" did something like that.

                    Nat Iwata
                    www.iwataillustration.com

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                    • Nazuba
                      Nazuba @natiwata last edited by

                      @natiwata Thank you for your reply!
                      Your prompt is lovely and it can verymuch turn into a flowing story for my portfolio but I am scared of pieces like those 😛

                      https://www.dribbble.com/nazuba
                      https://www.instagram.com/nazubahere/

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                      • Pamela Fraley
                        Pamela Fraley SVS OG @Nazuba last edited by

                        @Nazuba My first thought is a little girl sitting on the fire escape talking to an imaginary monster friend who is sitting on the dumpster. Great picture!

                        instagram.com/fraleycreates

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                        • Nazuba
                          Nazuba @Pamela Fraley last edited by

                          @Pamela-Fraley Thank you! Yes I am pretty much set on a ghost and a girl. Got sucked up in projects, Coming back to it now. Thanks for stopping by!

                          https://www.dribbble.com/nazuba
                          https://www.instagram.com/nazubahere/

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