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    3Thurs. - Sept. Heeeelp.

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    • AWall
      AWall last edited by AWall

      I'm not sure this is the style I want to pursue. I was trying to make a shift and do something a little different then I'm used to. I'm also not very experienced illustrating with photoshop. I'm feeling discouraged and will probably start fresh but figured I should get some feedback so I don't make the same mistakes the next round.

      This is a mid way point.

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      • evilrobot
        evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

        Really cool point of view. I like it very unique.

        http://www.palacioillustration.com/

        https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

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        • Chip Valecek
          Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @AWall last edited by

          @AWall great idea however I am not reading teeth with those shapes. They seem more Popsicle shape. I did a quick google search on "view from inside mouth" and there are some great images to use as reference for teeth shape. Looking forward to the finished piece.


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          • AWall
            AWall @Chip Valecek last edited by

            @Chip-Valecek I agree. I was trying to make them very stylized and cartoon like as I didn't want it to be gross but I think they need to be readdressed.

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            • Lee White
              Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

              I like the idea, but I'm not sure the view from inside the mouth is the best option here. This shot rarely works out unless it's an ad for a dentist.

              Do you have more sketches we can see with different options?

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              www.leewhiteillustration.com

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              • AWall
                AWall last edited by

                I'm ditching this. Going back to square one.

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                • AWall
                  AWall last edited by

                  http://forum.svslearn.com/topic/2409/round-2-sept-3thurs

                  New concept, @Lee-White

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