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    • Tannie Smith

      Feedback please. :-)
      General Discussion • feedback 3rd thursday portfolio • • Tannie Smith  

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      Sarah LuAnn

      Super fun concept (I love steampunk-y dirigibles, I have one in my portfolio too and it looks like you already have some great feedback. These forums are a great place for getting critiques, and its especially awesome when one of the instructors drops in lucky you! My only comment is your linework seems a little big inconsistent to me--its definitely all there on your dirigible and the dad and the house, but in places like the backpack and the bushes it looks more rendered. Variation in line work can be OK as long as there is some consistency and rhyme and reason to why things are different, which I'm not seeing in the way you have it right now.
    • 3Thurs. - Sept. Heeeelp.
      General Discussion • 3rd thursday • • AWall  

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      AWall

      http://forum.svslearn.com/topic/2409/round-2-sept-3thurs New concept, @Lee-White
    • Chris Perry

      Falconer Dorothy, Toto the falcon, Fool Scarecrow, Sir Tin Man and the Cowardly Dragon
      General Discussion • 3rd thursday ozcd medieval • • Chris Perry  

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    • Chris Perry

      June 3rd Thursday (4th Thursday)
      General Discussion • 3rd thursday june • • Chris Perry  

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      Chris Perry

      Capon Crusader is the only Cockeral that doesn't care for Cackling Cornish Crooks. Please give input for this. I wanted critiques before I colored it. Thanks, Chris
    • BradAYoo

      Lucy's Magic toolbox - April 3rd Thursday
      General Discussion • illustration 3rd thursday characters kidlit art picturebook • • BradAYoo  

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      BradAYoo

      @Lynn-Larson Thank Lynn. That tree was a lot of fun! I don't have my technique down yet so I wasn't too confident when I started rendering it. But with some play and trying different brushes it came out well. Last submission here, I promise... I think, hehheh. I submitted my illustration last night and became restless thinking of all the details that would help push the image. I added some falling leaves to the tree, some sparkles and an abstract tool to the toolbox. I am much happier with the results now. Thank you all for the kind words and comments! Happy 3rd Thursday.
    • Bob Szesnat

      April Third Thursday- work in progress
      General Discussion • 3rd thursday thumbnails 3rdthursday third thursday • • Bob Szesnat  

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      Bob Szesnat

      @evilrobot Thanks for bring that up. I was unsure too, if the conveyor belt is a tool or not, as it is described in the text? In the first one she is holding the box and the belt with the bottles are flying out. Maybe if she was reaching in and yanking it out. Unsure if that would be confusing or not? Thanks for your input.
    • lmrush

      3rd Thur Puppy love
      General Discussion • 3rd thursday • • lmrush  

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      lmrush

      @Rich-Green Happy to hear it! I obviously am a dog lover, I have a black and chocolate lab and my in laws lab is visiting so I have three underfoot at the moment.
    • carlossketches

      First 3rd Thu: Dec Santa's Magic Beard WIP
      General Discussion • wip 3rd thursday sketch • • carlossketches  

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      carlossketches

      @Dulcie a second piece!! i think I will, but maybe not for 3rd Thursday. Took some pictures of a toy train at work, I think I'll use that as reference. thanks for the encouragement.
    • joanie stone

      Santa sketch 3rd Thurs-Update
      General Discussion • 3rd thursday • • joanie stone  

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      Stephanie Hider

      Love the color scheme. the green is lovely.