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    NEED ART FOR SVS YOUTUBE CRITS!

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    • brettb_draws
      brettb_draws last edited by

      @Lee-White @Jake-Parker @Will-Terry
      I'd love to get your feedback on this one that I did earlier in the year! I was really happy with the concept and rendering but feel that the storytelling, and lighting could have been improved. I believe this was for the tiger prompt.

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      • Lee White
        Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

        We are doing a new episode of How to fix Your Art today so I wanted to bump this thread up! Keep submitting as we are going through all of these to find the ones to use for each episode. : )

        SVS Faculty Instructor
        www.leewhiteillustration.com

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        • Mia Clarke
          Mia Clarke @Lee White last edited by

          @Lee-White Here are two recent pieces of mine, would love a crit!

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          www.miaclarkeart.com
          https://www.instagram.com/miaclarkeart/

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos last edited by

            F88A47EF-96A3-41E5-9E30-AFA6BBA906D6.jpeg I’ve been struggling with this one!

            Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
            www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
            https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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            • Tom Harshberger
              Tom Harshberger last edited by

              I would love some advice on how to control the texture to draw the eye in without characters looking to clean in contrast. Or any advice really 🙂

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              instagram.com/tomharshberger.art

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                kayleenartlover last edited by

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                  kayleenartlover last edited by

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                  • Erichousel
                    Erichousel @Lee White last edited by

                    @Lee-White @Jake-Parker I was happy to see Jake critique one of my illustrations in the #4 video on characters. I loved the info and found it very useful. Thanks guys!

                    Eric Housel

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                    • brettb_draws
                      brettb_draws @Erichousel last edited by

                      Does anyone know where I can view the videos? It's says they're private on YouTube

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                      • Asyas_illos
                        Asyas_illos @brettb_draws last edited by

                        @brettb_draws I believe on YouTube they are only available for the next 24 hours, after that, if you’re an svs subscriber I think they are uploaded to the curriculum somewhere… I haven’t looked for them myself so I can’t tell you where exactly

                        Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                        www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                        https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                        • ashleegoovaerts
                          ashleegoovaerts @brettb_draws last edited by

                          @brettb_draws I'd also be curious where these are living in the curriculum 🙂 I missed the most recent one!

                          Ashlee Goovaerts
                          https://www.ashleegoovaerts.com/illustration
                          www.instagram.com/artwithashlee/

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                          • Stephanie H
                            Stephanie H @ashleegoovaerts last edited by

                            @ashleegoovaerts I'm in the same situation as well.

                            https://stephaniehammermiller.com/
                            https://www.instagram.com/stephanie.hammermiller/

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                            • Christijan
                              Christijan last edited by

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                              @Lee-White

                              If you're still doing critiques, this one is in need of some expert advice!

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                              • MimiHecher
                                MimiHecher last edited by

                                Happy to offer you something to explain how to NOT do it. 😃

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                                  Heather Foxwood last edited by

                                  ElephantandMousecompressed.jpg If you are still doing critiques I'd love input on what could be done to improve this!

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                                    Heather Foxwood @ashleegoovaerts last edited by

                                    @ashleegoovaerts I'd like to know too!

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                                    • von_Nimmermehr
                                      von_Nimmermehr @Heather Foxwood last edited by

                                      @ashleegoovaerts @Asyas_illos @Heather-Foxwood The How to Fix Ur Art is not under the curriculum just go on all courses and for me (i bet the order is different from computer to computer) its one of the first pictures shown. if not just type it in to the search field

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                                      Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
                                      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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                                      • Geoffrey Mégardon
                                        Geoffrey Mégardon last edited by

                                        This is one of my latest piece, I tried a lot of different compositions, and I would love your opinion / critique.
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                                        Not sure how many we can post, but I have a lot of recent work as I was working on my portfolio 😃

                                        Find me on Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nodragem/
                                        Portfolio: https://www.nodragemillustration.com

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                                        • Kristen Lango
                                          Kristen Lango last edited by

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                                          If you guys need more art to critique! I'd love some feedback on this one.

                                          https://www.kristenlango.com/
                                          https://www.instagram.com/kristendraws/

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                                          • NickyDrew
                                            NickyDrew last edited by

                                            Hi, I don't know if you're still looking for art to critique, but if you are, I'd love some help with this piece. It's a picture book cover mock-up from my portfolio. Other than my terrible attempts at painting dappled sunlight, I can't figure out why the illustration's not working. Any help would be super appreciated!
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                                            Portfolio: www.nickydrewillustration.com

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