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    NEED ART FOR SVS YOUTUBE CRITS!

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    • KatrinaF
      KatrinaF @Lee White last edited by

      @Lee-White
      Hey Lee! Katrina here. I'd love to get some feed back on this piece. Thx

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      • Maureen*Henry*Artist
        Maureen*Henry*Artist @Lee White last edited by

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        would love a critique

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          kayleenartlover @Lee White last edited by

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          I am planning on redrawing this piece since it is nearly a year old. I would love to get a critique on it before I recreate it.

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          • brettb_draws
            brettb_draws last edited by

            @Lee-White @Jake-Parker @Will-Terry
            I'd love to get your feedback on this one that I did earlier in the year! I was really happy with the concept and rendering but feel that the storytelling, and lighting could have been improved. I believe this was for the tiger prompt.

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            • Lee White
              Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

              We are doing a new episode of How to fix Your Art today so I wanted to bump this thread up! Keep submitting as we are going through all of these to find the ones to use for each episode. : )

              SVS Faculty Instructor
              www.leewhiteillustration.com

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              • Mia Clarke
                Mia Clarke @Lee White last edited by

                @Lee-White Here are two recent pieces of mine, would love a crit!

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                www.miaclarkeart.com
                https://www.instagram.com/miaclarkeart/

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                • Asyas_illos
                  Asyas_illos last edited by

                  F88A47EF-96A3-41E5-9E30-AFA6BBA906D6.jpeg I’ve been struggling with this one!

                  Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                  www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                  https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                  • Tom Harshberger
                    Tom Harshberger last edited by

                    I would love some advice on how to control the texture to draw the eye in without characters looking to clean in contrast. Or any advice really 🙂

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                    instagram.com/tomharshberger.art

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                    • K
                      kayleenartlover last edited by

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                        kayleenartlover last edited by

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                        • Erichousel
                          Erichousel @Lee White last edited by

                          @Lee-White @Jake-Parker I was happy to see Jake critique one of my illustrations in the #4 video on characters. I loved the info and found it very useful. Thanks guys!

                          Eric Housel

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                          • brettb_draws
                            brettb_draws @Erichousel last edited by

                            Does anyone know where I can view the videos? It's says they're private on YouTube

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                            • Asyas_illos
                              Asyas_illos @brettb_draws last edited by

                              @brettb_draws I believe on YouTube they are only available for the next 24 hours, after that, if you’re an svs subscriber I think they are uploaded to the curriculum somewhere… I haven’t looked for them myself so I can’t tell you where exactly

                              Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                              www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                              https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                              • ashleegoovaerts
                                ashleegoovaerts @brettb_draws last edited by

                                @brettb_draws I'd also be curious where these are living in the curriculum 🙂 I missed the most recent one!

                                Ashlee Goovaerts
                                https://www.ashleegoovaerts.com/illustration
                                www.instagram.com/artwithashlee/

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                                • Stephanie H
                                  Stephanie H @ashleegoovaerts last edited by

                                  @ashleegoovaerts I'm in the same situation as well.

                                  https://stephaniehammermiller.com/
                                  https://www.instagram.com/stephanie.hammermiller/

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                                  • Christijan
                                    Christijan last edited by

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                                    @Lee-White

                                    If you're still doing critiques, this one is in need of some expert advice!

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                                    • MimiHecher
                                      MimiHecher last edited by

                                      Happy to offer you something to explain how to NOT do it. 😃

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                                        Heather Foxwood last edited by

                                        ElephantandMousecompressed.jpg If you are still doing critiques I'd love input on what could be done to improve this!

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                                          Heather Foxwood @ashleegoovaerts last edited by

                                          @ashleegoovaerts I'd like to know too!

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                                          • von_Nimmermehr
                                            von_Nimmermehr @Heather Foxwood last edited by

                                            @ashleegoovaerts @Asyas_illos @Heather-Foxwood The How to Fix Ur Art is not under the curriculum just go on all courses and for me (i bet the order is different from computer to computer) its one of the first pictures shown. if not just type it in to the search field

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                                            Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
                                            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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