Hi fellow Rabbits,
I know this is SO last minute. If you have 48 seconds to throw an opinion my way, I would be grateful. Is there anything super annoying about this composition? Does it make only 55% sense? Can you even tell what is going on? Feel free to point it out. Thank you very much in advance.
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@jenn This reminds me of Cool Runnings and it looks to me like the fourth/back bunny is falling off or struggling to jump onto the bobsled.
@KevinTreaccar yay, you got it, thanks!
studiojcd.com
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@jenn feel the rhythm, feel the rhyme, look out Jamaica it’s bobsled time! This is looking great!
@jenn I think it's lovely! I like all the curves. Perhaps the horizontal line in front of the mountains bothers me a little though – it could be less straight - maybe like a flattish U-shape? That's just my sense though, it's not well-founded in any experience of bobsledding down mountains.
@Asyas_illos thanks 
@lucy_gow thank you so much
@jenn A good composition, I would make the central figures and car larger to add impact.
@PenAndrew ok thanks very much
This is so much fun! He's falling/being blow off the end of the bobsled, right? I think your composition is working well. I like how the mountains and stream in the background are mimicking the curve of the track. I also think it has a good sense of movement to it. Keep going!
Thank you for helping me with the composition, friends. I didn't quite finish but I'm just going to submit it anyway for my own sense of closure. I can already see so many things wrong with it. I will revisit later. 
studiojcd.com
she/her/hers
Insta/Twitter: @chengdesautels
@jenn I really like it, great colors!
@jenn I think it's lovely! I like all the curves. Perhaps the horizontal line in front of the mountains bothers me a little though – it could be less straight - maybe like a flattish U-shape? That's just my sense though, it's not well-founded in any experience of bobsledding down mountains.
